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Dark But Hopfully Insightful As Well


Keep your grip, don't let me get away
watch me slip in and out of today
As all the bright lights blur and go Grey
Like mega pixels in a camera i start to fade away

Falling into consciousness
My world goes black
My body starts shutting down
But will i come back
Will near death change my perspective
Will i live safely down life's path

Could i possibly live without risk
without always having the possibility of dying
If i come back would i be safer if i started hiding
The more that i breathe, the more that i waste
Yet if i stop breathing once again death is what i taste
if you think about it, there is no possible way to escape

This life you must except
Because first there is life
Than you must accept death
Because only one time you survive
Find yourself Stuck between
But all you can do is just believe












Nov 19th, 2009
Cody Potter

by Loveformusicandpoetry1790
posted on 11/19/2009

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Comment by SilentWords: Nov 19, 2009 3:13 pm
I really like the last stanza, nice job.
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Nov 19, 2009 1:48 pm
It was more of an imagination type deal, nothing serious so ya'll know.. i didn't expect it to turn out this way.. Cause at first i was just thinking a dark poem, but than i feel/felt like it came out insightful towards the end... I don't know maybe ya'll share your opinions, beliefs and also constructive criticism as well.. Thank you and hope you like it..
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 24, 2009 3:44 am
This will haunt me o.o
Comment by james1989: Nov 24, 2009 8:55 am
well it is pretty dark but it is good
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