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Daddy's Girl

It’s a dark, lonely night
Almost bedtime it seems
But she doesn’t wanna go
Because she knows what it means

He says, ‘Go on little girly’
He touches her skin
‘Daddy will be up shortly…
To tuck you in’

And as she slowly makes her way up the stairs
Her small body begins to tremble ‘cuz she’s so scared
And there are a thousand things racing through her head
With a tear in her eye she crawls into bed

And she lies there
She knows what’s coming
Trapped in the darkness
She feels like running

But then daddy comes in
And daddy walks over
And everything gets darker
As the room grows colder

And there’s no escape
As his hand begins to snake
And she closes her eyes
As her little heart breaks

And she wants her mommy
But mommy is scared
And she hates her daddy
Wonders if mommy cares

But little does she know
That mommy’s aware
But it’s easier to pretend
That the bad things aren’t there

And when daddy crawls into bed that night
He’ll kiss mommy on the cheek and turn out the light
And just like her daughter she’ll feel the fear in her gut
A painful combination of trepidation and disgust

And little girly
She’s still in bed
Body frozen
No thoughts in her head

Just the darkness
And all of the pain
And for mommy’s sake
She hopes that the blood don’t leave a stain

by LittleBoyLonely
posted on 11/28/2007

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 28, 2007 12:38 pm
oh my god. that's horrible! the fuckin dad's a bastard! pardon my language. great poem though.
Comment by PrayForMe: Nov 28, 2007 5:58 pm
Wow,...That is amazing.
So sad, so emotional.
Vote up Smiley
Comment by Tonya: Nov 28, 2007 8:18 pm
OMG...The father does not have that right! He should be put a way for life! Great poem thou i vote it up
Comment by xforlornxangelx: Nov 28, 2007 11:38 pm
i can sort of relate before i was sent to live with my new family my dad was like that. i hope things get better for you. good poem
Comment by romantichomicide: Nov 29, 2007 12:38 am
seems like my childhood. I'm am glad i don't own a gun.
Comment by sassicat: Nov 29, 2007 11:03 am
Holy crap, that's so sad! People like that should be locked up. Great poem, vote up.
Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 29, 2007 1:34 pm
i grew wickedly sad reading this poem. i hope everthing is ok and dad aint in the pic no more. man that is so emotionally abusing me to know someone that writes beautiful poetry but it has to be so so upsetting in what u write. be safe.
Comment by sajinn: Nov 29, 2007 8:11 pm
u need some one to talk to?i m here 4 u.....great poem *voting up*
Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 1, 2007 8:18 am
omg! he's such an asshole! sorry u had to go through that. and i'm sure ur mom cares but is just as scared as u.
good poem.
Comment by sajinn: Dec 1, 2007 11:35 am
well now i feel stupid !!thanks alot!!!grrrr!!!!(goes back to evil fortress)
Comment by ShelbyBoo: Dec 2, 2007 8:35 am
..Sadly I can relate to this..my dad is like that but my mom just left so now I have no way out....
Good Poem!
Comment by soullesskiss: Dec 2, 2007 12:51 pm
People care... They are just scared... The poem flows really well. I adore it.
Comment by Brighenti: Dec 3, 2007 4:35 am
So sad, but the poem is really great, voted up
Comment by oOSilentSoulOo: Dec 3, 2007 8:42 am
... wow... oO well done... vote up!
Comment by MyMisery: Dec 4, 2007 11:16 am
omg that is sooooooo sad is it true?
Comment by Emobabi2009: Dec 4, 2007 11:49 am
Holy Moly that is a great poem! It is really good.I vote up for you!
Comment by babygirl082390: Dec 5, 2007 10:45 am
wow!!!!!!!!
Comment by MsKeys1707: Dec 5, 2007 12:30 pm
omg this is horrible! that is a really sad poem no one should ever have to go through that, but the sad thing is there are sick-minded people in the world that does horrible stuff like this.. great poem, full of emotion and extremely well written
Comment by FreeFalling: Dec 5, 2007 10:17 pm
I agree with MsKeys1707. This is a really well written poem, you did a good job on it. Keep writing. Vote up.
Comment by mysterianne': Dec 8, 2007 3:07 am
i am the been there, lived through that...perfect description,honey.i vote up--yesh!!
Comment by thegurlat410: Dec 8, 2007 12:15 pm
you write beautiful poetry, I don't leave many comments at all but this one of all deserves it. Written with conviction, and in the right person its beautiful, really!
Comment by Confused4life: Dec 9, 2007 7:50 pm
This is horrible and beautiful all at the same time. This poems brought tears to my eyes i'm so sorry this happened. It show's great emotion and the flow was amazing as well.
Great Job, Whit Smiley
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Dec 10, 2007 1:21 pm
Amazing. I agree with basically everyone especial Confused4life about this being horrible and beautiful at the same time. Horrible story, beautiful writing. Is this true? Anyways, amazing job. Keep writing. Oh and vote up.
Comment by brockendreams: Dec 11, 2007 9:02 am
this is a great poem i can relate to you in a differnt sort of way. i feel sad for you!
Comment by Shorty07HeyHey: Dec 11, 2007 9:52 am
OMG this poem is great so sad tho!!! Sad face
Comment by xmxixsxtxy: Dec 15, 2007 12:57 pm
i luv the poem..thats so so sad!!!!..check out my poems tell me if there good or not!!!!
Comment by Morbidobsession: Dec 15, 2007 8:20 pm
I love this poem even though it is so sad. It's extremely powerful and it makes me think how lucky I am to have a non-abusive, loving family. Faboulous Job, and to be extremely Cliche...I snap.
Comment by LostInside: Dec 19, 2007 2:58 pm
w..o..w,w...o...w,realy good poem,but wow... (*can't say more so stareing at computer screen with mouth hang open*)
Comment by MysticFog: Dec 22, 2007 4:15 pm
whoa...just wow thats amazing
Comment by kassey: Dec 27, 2007 10:13 am
What terrible memories to hold through life. Good luck, I hope you can find closure. Very well written.
Comment by shonty13: Dec 30, 2007 11:54 pm
that is sooooo horrible...
i should have never read it because now i remember my pain... it's like he's on me and doing it to me all over.. i can't take it.
*not my dad*
Comment by megapat: Jan 4, 2008 11:01 pm
why would someone do that omg
Comment by invu2: Jan 6, 2008 7:08 am
It is sad that people can be like that, isn't? People like that should not be able to have kids...
Comment by JustAFriend0NothiongMore: Jan 10, 2008 12:49 am
I hate father's like that. Pisses me off!! Great poem.
Comment by jendocious: Jan 11, 2008 12:17 am
Very good, yet sad, poem.
Comment by christi823: Jan 16, 2008 8:02 am
This poem is very good, but it's pissing me off...
*Voting up.*
:]
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Feb 7, 2008 1:01 pm
omg! i love the way you wrote this but i hate the story it has to tell! but great job indeed
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Feb 7, 2008 1:01 pm
omg! i love the way you wrote this but i hate the story it has to tell! but great job indeed
Comment by sajinn: Feb 19, 2008 5:10 pm
holy shit!!!!how come no one comments on mine that much?!!!
Comment by sajinn: Feb 19, 2008 5:11 pm
oh....hi there just goin back and reading your poems!!!i realy like them u should write more!^^
Comment by ashen: Apr 23, 2008 12:04 am
i hope to god that this isnt a true story and if it is maybe the lttle girl is in a better place now....i hope
Comment by tinkie: May 11, 2008 10:52 pm
both parents are as bad as eachother. if u dont try to protect your children you dont deserve them. sorry.
Comment by GracelessFall: Jul 14, 2008 10:06 pm
absolutley superb. The way you depict the imagery is very very vivid and disturbing and it strikes alot of chords on the emotional guitar. You are a very talented and unique guy. I hope you find yourself in all of your searching, it's not easy, i've been searching for myself for a long time and am finally at a place where i am at peace with myself, sometimes for us ppl thats what we call solace.
Comment by crimsonrayne: Aug 10, 2008 3:26 pm
It really touches my heart because i can complete relate. Very well written and articulated.
Comment by LifeIsIronic: Nov 15, 2008 12:23 pm
Omg thats HorribleSad face
Comment by Haylo: Dec 17, 2008 12:21 pm
wow. that is an amzing poem. it is full of emotion and truth. u have tremendous talent. keep writing!
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