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Comatose Gaze

She watched from the ceiling
Her body screaming and pleading
As the man she once knew found power in his dealing
As the clothes torn off her body peeling
Now here comes the same familiar dirty feeling...

Her legs tore like wings
Broken in the wrong ways
As the song of sacrifice, sadly sung it plays
The force of a thousand lives crash jagged upon her
And now its time for the next phase
As she watches in a comatose gaze
Burning a hope to concur....

Pounding blows to a fragile body
Watch as her porcelain face blank
While her graceful heart rotting
But this is just another notch
His crowd cheers as he makes another rank...

Broken bones never hurt
But knowing no one hears her cry
The corrupted world he shaped
Watching his body with her in the dirt
She's just another sacrifice
The blue eyed beauty raped...

by controlthedemon
posted on 10/05/2009

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Comment by BlackbookPast: Oct 5, 2009 9:37 am
it kinda has a sing song feel to it if you read it fast
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