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Can't take it anymore

Shaking in fear,
Listening to his footsteps near,
Coming into my room,
To start the night of doom,
Hitting me in the face,
Claiming I am a disgrace
Making me sink to the floor
And him giving me more,
More pain, more agony,
Making me bleed endlessly
I’m tired of being hurt,
I usually try and desert
My body and my mind
To try and leave the pain behind
Becoming someone new
To try and get threw,
But this time I won’t lie and take it,
I am not going to quit,
I will get back up once more
He hits me wanting me to sink to the floor
But no, you want to cause me pain,
Hit me over and over again,
I bleed and I feel no more pain
What am I doing? What will I gain?
He grabs me by the throat; I’m out of breath
I will soon face my very own death
He throws me on the ground,
As my blood starts to surround
My fragile body, that’s left in fright
Him watching in delight,
He walks out, leaving me in the dark,
He laughs, and leaves no remark,
I want to be brave and think it's alright,
But i know he’ll come back, to finish me tomorrow night

by DarkDay
posted on 05/14/2007

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Comment by MsKeys1707: May 14, 2007 4:04 pm
OMG this is soooo sadSad face i mean who would put anyone through this much pain
you just need to stay strong.. i really dont know what else to say because i can read this over and over and still cant know exactly what ur going through
i just hope things get better for you and he's gonna hurt in te long run because life is KARMA
Very good poem as well
take care
Comment by AngelFire: May 14, 2007 4:23 pm
The poem was worded very well....i love the way you rymed and it contains a lot of emotion ............ great job!
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: May 14, 2007 5:57 pm
wow..this is very said...this has a lot of emotion in it...great job
Comment by DarkDay: May 14, 2007 6:12 pm
Thank you to all those who comment, really appreciated, it encourages me to write more Open smile
Comment by missingmom: May 14, 2007 7:24 pm
You need to get help from CPS. I'm glad your writing is helping you to deal with your feelings right now, keep it up, your poems are fantastic, though so very sad.
Comment by darkangel69: May 15, 2007 10:20 am
HELL YEA THAT IS A REALLY GOOD POEM AND i LOVE IT!
Comment by Poison: May 18, 2007 11:27 am
awww i know that feeling too..back when my dad was still with my mom
Comment by John: Jun 25, 2007 8:41 am
woah..thats deep and scary..i used to be beat by my father and i can relate..this poem is amazing!
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