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Broken Wings

Broken Wings
Broken Heart
I can't understand
Everything is crushing me

I try to stand
over and over
I shakily stumble to my feet
again and again

Broken Heart
Broken Smile
I won't rely on anyone
my pride may be my death

My feet hit the floor
I stand balanced
but my feet sink through
being dragged down

Broken Wings
Broken soul
being pulled
deeper and darker

I crash into the floor
a heart with wounds
a gashed little soul
lost in the darkness

Broken Wings
Broken Life
Broken Wings
Broken Everything

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Okay any comments?

by alostsoul
posted on 06/27/2009

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Comment by Shane616: Jun 28, 2009 12:57 pm
Nice, very emotional and deep.
Comment by alostsoul: Jun 29, 2009 12:15 pm
My work is mostly a result of what I feel
Comment by JoeV: Jun 28, 2009 10:02 am
Very sad one...I have to ask, are your poems a reflection of you or are you just a story teller?
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jun 28, 2009 12:52 am
Same here,, i agree.. Deep words, and deep emotion lovely piece of work, keep it up*smiles*
Comment by kazedragon: Jun 27, 2009 9:40 pm
Wow, I'm shivering! This is a really good poem, I like it. ^^
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