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Breaking

I feel as though im breaking
Every piece of me shattering
My soul is trembling, as the darkness comes flowing in
I open my mouth to scream, but nothing comes out
Only water comes in
Another piece just broke off, the tears are falling
My hands are shaking
My heart is going to stop
Oh god, I wish death would hurry up and find me
I cant take another day of this
I cant stand to have another breakdown
Another tear fall down my face
Please, if someone is listening
Please give a message to Death
Tell her to hurry
Put me out of my misery

by meltedsnowman
posted on 04/01/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 1, 2008 8:49 am
wow..very intense...fantistic poem...
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 1, 2008 9:16 am
really great poem
Comment by Mangekyo: Apr 1, 2008 9:54 am
hey.........kinda like what i write.........only deeper.......great job........i loved to no end
Comment by tobeloved: Apr 1, 2008 3:07 pm
wow.. that's intense.. great job! very well written! =)
Comment by controlthedemon: Apr 3, 2008 4:37 pm
wow
i understand this in SO many way
great job hun
keep it up
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