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Blood

Blood on the ceiling
Blood on the floor.
I'm still not satisfied
I want more.

Hit your head
Stab your side.
I have no conscious
I have already died.

You have to die
You don't deserve to live.
What you've done
Is something I could never forgive.

There's blood everywhere
It's on my face.
Still not satisfied
I must pick up the pace.

Hack your arms
Dig out your eyes
This is for every tear,
you made me cry.

There's not enough blood
Must open you up more.
My heart is begging
for all of this gore.

Finally it's done
my task is complete.
Blood is in the air
and it smells so sweet.

As I leave you dead,
Lying on the floor.
I keep thinking about your blood,
and how I wanted more.

by PrayForMe
posted on 02/17/2008

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Comment by kayla: Feb 17, 2008 4:37 am
Great follow on, same sick twisted theme,lol. Good JobSmiley
Comment by Bourne: Feb 17, 2008 12:08 pm
a little distrubing like kayla said but it is a great piece of work.
Comment by fallenangelx14: Feb 17, 2008 2:39 pm
good job. sick and twisted and amazing all in one. great job.
Comment by FreeFalling: Feb 17, 2008 4:25 pm
Great poem, just as good as Twisted Grin. Good job.
Comment by AnnaChick951: Feb 18, 2008 3:59 pm
Great poem.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Feb 18, 2008 4:28 pm
OMG this poem is AMAZING!!!
The flow is incredible, so much emotion
I LOVE ITSmileySmiley
Keep Writing and Take Care
Comment by Tonya: Feb 18, 2008 4:42 pm
awsome job....it is twisted but amazing u have a talent...keep up the great work
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 19, 2008 1:30 am
you keep writing about that person.. im sorry they caused you so much pain.
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Feb 19, 2008 5:33 am
wow.

great flow on this one.
very twisted. i love it.
amazing job.
Comment by scarredemotions17: Feb 19, 2008 6:30 am
woah! it was major. i liked it but it was just i can't even use words to explain it.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 19, 2008 9:51 am
wickedly sick
Comment by Rage: Feb 19, 2008 11:31 am
omg i love this poem it is so great i love sickness
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 19, 2008 4:26 pm
Very Dark......Dun,dun,dun....Smiley
Comment by hotchick: Feb 21, 2008 9:28 pm
wow Sticking tongue out
Comment by SilentlyScreamingInside: Feb 22, 2008 12:10 pm
I love this poem. Its one of my favs. Its really good, it can be read fast which is a plus.

vote up
Comment by sassicat: Feb 23, 2008 8:35 am
wow, this is really twisted! i love it, great job!!
Comment by xxluverofyouxx: Feb 27, 2008 7:50 am
this is my favorite of all the poems ive heard. =D great job
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 2, 2008 9:55 am
marvelous deep and equivocal/ambiguous until end.
Great
Comment by gaara: Mar 3, 2008 7:51 am
Awesome poem. Always wanting more and more gore. Love it. Makes me remember the times i wanted that. That's over great poem Smiley.
Comment by LynnDoll: Mar 12, 2008 6:14 pm
Smiley gory and wonderful
i love the ending
really well writen XD
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