bleeding

I love it very much.

Thats emotinal and deep
its v gd the choice of words u have chosen

hmm. as I said in my last comment on your other poem, you definitely have something that could be very beautiful there. Take some time and look at the positives in life! Cutting is never an answer to a problem, I've tried and in the long run, it doesn't make you feel better. You're only hurting yourself and everyone around you. You probably have so much to offer to the world, especially looking at your writing and how emotional and deep it is.
keep writing, but look at the sky once in a while. =]

your work is good,but like alex said (asdfyz) said...cutting never really helps anything.trust me i know,i've also done so in my past.you can move past that though and be better than the blade you hold. =)