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Big Brother

Her brother's coming home today
And she just can't wait!
She runs home from school
Hoping to see his smiling face.

When she arrives to her house
Her brother is right there.
He looks, smiles and says to her
"I've been waiting for you here."

"Mom and dad will be home late
So it'll be just you and me.
Now why don't we go inside
And I'll make us both some tea."

They went inside the house
And had a big cup of tea.
Then her brother yawned and said
"Why don't you come to my room with me?"

She nodded, got up and walked to his room.
And he followed close behind.
When they got to his room she sat on his bed
While he shut the door and locked it tight.

"Brother what are you doing?"
She asked him, a little frightened,
As he walked over
And laid his hands on her.

"I thought you'd give me a nice welcome home
My beautiful, young sis."
He said with an evil grin
And a whole lot of bliss.

She closed her eyes
And started to cry
As she begged him to stop.
she felt her little body tear apart.

When it was all over
He told her not to tell
For if she said one word
She would go straight to hell.

He left her on his bed
And took off down the hall.
He sat on the couch
And regretted nothing at all.

As she laid there crying
Feeling nothing but pain.
She asked, "Why?"
As she relived it again.

"Why did you hurt me?
You took my innocence away.
This pain is so intense!
Why did you do this to me,
Big Brother?!"

by HeartlessAngel
posted on 12/04/2007

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Comments: 65
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Comment by Emobabi2009: Dec 4, 2007 11:54 am
Oh my god! That is....wow...I-I-I wow...holy moly....that is great and sad...and wow....I am speechless....
Comment by MysticFog: Dec 4, 2007 1:43 pm
W...o...w...yeah...i...agree with ^^^ wow....just so sad and amazing and beautiful and i cried....wow...
Comment by ShelbyBoo: Dec 4, 2007 2:14 pm
..*tear* That is horrible, not the poem but just the situation that poor little girl is in...the poem was really good Laura!
Comment by soullesskiss: Dec 4, 2007 2:38 pm
thats a great poem...unbelievable sad... reminds me of one of my pomes...
Comment by Tonya: Dec 4, 2007 6:20 pm
aw that is soo sad..good poem thou..it made me cry for the lil girl cuz i can feel for her...good poem.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Dec 5, 2007 4:56 am
Good poem, but sad.
Comment by ForeverAlone: Dec 5, 2007 7:58 am
that is so sad, but its a good poem.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Dec 5, 2007 12:22 pm
this is really sad, full of emotion great poem
Comment by Brighenti: Dec 5, 2007 1:43 pm
Really sad :S on the other hand it's a great poem, voted up
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Dec 5, 2007 2:18 pm
great scots...

i liked this poem...grusome as it was
Comment by OneManGang: Dec 5, 2007 6:24 pm
i almost cried i never almost cry W.O.W your good
Comment by FreeFalling: Dec 5, 2007 10:07 pm
This left me speechless. I seriously don't know what to say other than great poem. You did a really good job wirting this even if the subject was really horrible. Great poem, and keep writing. Vote up.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 6, 2007 2:37 pm
Thank you guys for the comments! ^_^ I'm glad you like it!
Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 6, 2007 6:02 pm
I agree with FreeFalling.
Amazing work Smiley
Vote Up
Comment by BeMyFriend: Dec 7, 2007 10:01 am
awWW...what a mean brother....so sad things like this happens escpecailly when they're just lil babies still....good one though...
Comment by xwhisperingxanglex: Dec 7, 2007 6:35 pm
this is really sad.
i love it tho
Comment by kitten546: Dec 7, 2007 7:58 pm
wow very sad but good
Comment by mysterianne': Dec 8, 2007 3:09 am
amazing,dear.you have such insight and empathy for these characters...i vote...up
Comment by punkprincess: Dec 8, 2007 12:45 pm
i love this.. very sad though.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Dec 9, 2007 2:16 pm
Great poem...sad as it was though.It's horrible what the little girl had to go through,absolutley horrible!Voted up though good job!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 12, 2007 4:45 am
omg! wow! as i kept reading this i knew wat was goin to happen, i just kept getting more and more sad. but i swear tears were this close to coming out! really great poem. great great but sad.
Comment by LostInside: Dec 14, 2007 12:51 pm
((+_+)) wow i don't know what to say....very good poem,but...wow,so sad...but good (voted up a lot)
Comment by leadme2temptation: Dec 16, 2007 8:04 am
wow i love it....i'm crying....wow
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Dec 16, 2007 12:16 pm
holy... oh my god.... i.... wow...... i dont know...... amazing, astonishing, mind-blowing... great job
Comment by truckergirl14: Dec 20, 2007 8:35 am
wow your brother is mean good poem
Comment by quies: Dec 23, 2007 12:28 am
A refreshing read. Very good job.
Comment by TifaTheAngel: Dec 26, 2007 5:39 pm
i love it.Its truely very sad.It makes me want to weep. your're so talented.^^
Comment by HowCouldYou: Dec 27, 2007 5:09 pm
That is soooooooo sad!.
But I love it..
Great poem. Smiley
Comment by GiveMeU: Dec 28, 2007 6:53 pm
Wow so EMOTIONAL! Wonderful poem. BUT NOW I AM SOO SAD! Sad face
Comment by FlawsAndAll: Dec 31, 2007 8:41 pm
OMG Sad face I seen that coming. So HORRIBLE. great poem. But very very sad.
Comment by XfroggieluverX: Jan 2, 2008 1:05 pm
OMGSH.. that is so sad.. i had tears in my eyes...
Comment by SadGirl96: Jan 4, 2008 12:49 am
This poem is amazing!.
Comment by Poison: Jan 4, 2008 11:34 am
...............
Comment by megapat: Jan 4, 2008 10:58 pm
*sob, sob,sooooooooooobbbbb
Comment by shatterdxXxseasons: Jan 5, 2008 9:47 am
oh... wow thats...horrible, but wonderfully written.
Comment by megapat: Jan 5, 2008 8:21 pm
agin sobity sob sob
Comment by SingingHeart: Jan 7, 2008 12:20 am
Oh my God... I am speechless
This story is like a japanese movie, its name was ( i am in love with my little sister) I couldn't watch it all coz it was terrifying ... But great poem
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 7, 2008 10:48 pm
Oh my... wow... beautifully written, but so sad.
Keep writing
Comment by loveme77: Jan 8, 2008 4:10 pm
Oh... wow.... you wrote it so good... that poor, poor little girl... Great job.
Comment by JustAFriend0NothiongMore: Jan 9, 2008 11:49 pm
did this really happen? if it did I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY!!!! I know it does nothing but still. *tear tear*
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 10, 2008 6:34 am
i dont know what to say...this poem is so... ummm...wow
Comment by EmotionalReck07: Jan 11, 2008 7:36 pm
wow. this is intense. O_O
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 11, 2008 7:58 pm
OMG I CANT BELIEVE YOU ARE GOING TO TAKE CREDIT FOR THIS!!!!! ITS NOT EVEN YOUR POEM I HAVE READ THIS MULTIPLE TIMES BEFORE AND I HAVE READ YOUR OTHER WRITTING AND THIS IS NOT YOURS!!!! OMG YOU ARE TERRIBLE! I CANT BELIEVE YOU! ERGH THAT IS JUST I AM SO MAD, CREDIT STEALER, YOU WANT TO FEEL GOOD? WRITE A POEM THAT IS YOURS TRUST ME IT FEELS ALOT BETTER TO HAVE PEOPLE SAY NICE THINGS ABOUT A POEM YOU ACTUALLY WROTE!!!!!!!!
Comment by megapat: Jan 11, 2008 9:26 pm
this is the millionth time ive read this and it still takes my breath away
Comment by megapat: Jan 11, 2008 9:28 pm
is that true?
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Jan 13, 2008 10:42 am
Hey Ls, you Rock! this poem is just so....*tear* Good. And no misspellings...i taught you well. Love ya!
Comment by lost4evr: Jan 17, 2008 11:26 am
i could'nt imagine that! especially because it was some one she held so close. omg! that was awesome!
Comment by cryingblackblood: Jan 25, 2008 9:46 am
this poem is reallly amzing, drepressing but amzing
Comment by megapat: Feb 14, 2008 12:05 am
tear tear tearity tear tear
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 4, 2008 9:27 am
Great and emotional.... hope you didnt have to throughlive that
Comment by Mangekyo: Mar 6, 2008 9:14 am
what a poem........to depict hope then a betrayal so grand it hurts the soul..........
good work though
Comment by missingpuzzlepiece: Mar 24, 2008 5:43 pm
I hope that nobody ever has to go through something like this... it is one of the most horrible and confusing things you will ever have to deal with and I hope that the little girl in the poem writes a sequel about her life and how she dealt with this.
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 10, 2008 10:00 am
wow i really don't know what to say all i can think to see is keep up the good poems they are really great i like them! ^.^
Comment by asdfyz: May 19, 2008 3:13 pm
that makes me want to cry. seriously. (good poem and all... very good) but idn how u think up that stuff. It would tear my heart apart to write aobut that.

I liked your poem. It was so tragic yet amazing. I really want to cry.
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 3, 2008 9:01 am
When I read that poem, I almost started to cry, but I couldn't because I was in school. It's a really good poem.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 17, 2008 12:18 pm
Thank you for all of your comments. I never expected so many people to comment on it.
Comment by AbusedBabySister: Nov 1, 2008 2:20 pm
wow.. well i know how you feel..
Comment by AbusedBabySister: Nov 1, 2008 2:21 pm
wow.. thats terrible.. but i can truthfully sympathize with you.. something similar happened to me..
Comment by AbusedBabySister: Nov 1, 2008 2:40 pm
i have a poem dedicated to my brother .. its called you will never understand.. check it out and tell me what you think..
Comment by tobeloved: Nov 1, 2008 4:20 pm
Oh my. that's is horrible. It's written so well, but it's soo sad. Poor little girl :'(
Amazing job, though.
Comment by rayne482: Jan 8, 2009 6:36 am
Wow. Sad poem, but well written.
Comment by grace25: Jun 5, 2009 10:07 am
WOW. that is a GREAT poem, but really sad keep it up!
Comment by TerraFaye: Jun 5, 2009 11:52 pm
i love the poem but i feel tears coming oh my goodness that is so sad
Comment by MyNAMEisBUBBLEICIOUS: Jul 1, 2009 11:02 pm
w..o...w.. this was *speechless* amazing
Comment by HelloKitty89: Nov 24, 2009 9:37 pm
Sad, but so true. There are too many people that go through that. ThanXs for writing about a real issue that affect many lives. Most people don't talk about stuff that really affects others, but you have a gift. Thanks for using it in this way.
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