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Assassin's Blade

A void, Dark and lonely,sad with twilight's gloom

I grope my way over rotted remains that once were love
The scrape of bone grates on my soul
The lights,scattered quickly fading
Their color less than vibrant even seen through prismed eyes

Each light a fading hope of love and happiness
Each slowly sinking into the inky blackness

The blackness that flows from my wounded heart
The Black ichor that once was love so sweet

Flows slowly forth devouring the hope,the love
Slowly covering the phosphorescent bones of my lust and desire

The wound so deep, caused my such delicate hands
Such a lovely face to entice my heart upon the assassin's blade

How lovely did the light play upon that blade as it slid into my heart
It's poison turning sweet love into this black ooze.

And still I see your face hovering just out of reach
could I reach you, one kiss before all is black

The stark terror of loneliness
Left with my unfocused prismed eyes, no light to see

Just the black Ichor of a ruined Love.

by Nick1959
posted on 07/21/2009

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Comment by Sapphy: Sep 2, 2009 4:26 pm
I love the line: "such a lovely face to entice my heart upon the assassins blade". its so hard in relationships to see past what we want to see to the blackness below the surface. some people are truly not worthy of attention. Im sorry you had to endure this kind of pain.
Comment by kiraralee77: Aug 30, 2009 7:33 pm
amazing!! yet again. wonderful write. it is so sad and painful.. but beautiful and just.. amazing. great write!.
Comment by ForeverSearching: Jul 22, 2009 8:44 am
How sad.

I am so so so sorry.
Sad face

Tho, I think this is the best poem you have submitted.

Its wonderful.
I dont think it could get any better.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jul 25, 2009 2:57 pm
oooh. *cringes* this is so damn...worrisome and sorrowful and depressive and heartbreaking...ah. but really a truly great poem. a lot of clever symbolism and emotion put into this and I really hope you're okay Pops. but other than that--wonderful poem.
Comment by SilentWords: Jul 29, 2009 11:05 am
With love comes pain, and with pain comes a love for the pain. It really is a vicious cycle. I have found more pain in love then in any other aspect of my life. Wonderful poem, bleak and sad, but written with such beauty.
Comment by lexxie2323: Sep 12, 2009 3:19 pm
yo dude, this isnt lexxie... its her bff!Open smile umm... k, i have questions for you...
1. how old are you?
2. how perverted are you?
3. you do know that this isnt a dating site, rite?
4. what the hell is a "internet daughter"?
5. why do you talk so much about women in your profile? and ya... umm to sum it up.... what the fuch?
Comment by Nick1959: Oct 2, 2009 3:13 pm
to answer lexie bff what is your problem my profile answers most of the questions. I don't think this is a dating site and can be a father figure to any one I wish. Now I have a question.

who died and made you god?

Get over yourself and stop judging what you don't know
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