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An Enemy Of Mine

I saw you walking on the street,
Why were you staring at me?
You had a knife in your pocket,
Your mouth ran away, you couldn’t stop it,
Been cocky just because you had a knife,
I didn’t know this and I risked my life,
You were cocky with my mate that’s why I flipped,
Did it on purpose to provoke me, you obnoxious dick,
I shoved you and you flew back,
I swung for you and heard a crack,
I broke two knuckles right through the middle,
If I hit you again you would have been a cripple,
I’m now wearing a pot if I see you again make sure to run,
You had a knife so next time I’ll have a gun!

Note I’m not going to shoot anyone! The rest is true, Thanks for reading

by MindTwister
posted on 01/31/2008

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Comments: 23
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Comment by YourmyChemical: Jan 31, 2008 2:43 pm
hahaha i like it
its catchy
Comment by YourmyChemical: Jan 31, 2008 2:43 pm
hahaha i like it
its catchy
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 2:45 pm
thanks m8
Comment by loveme77: Jan 31, 2008 3:14 pm
I like the rythem to it Sticking tongue out Great job!
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 3:17 pm
thanks
Comment by teardrops: Jan 31, 2008 4:38 pm
LOL I LIKEY IT TOO!!! your poems are all so good.
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 4:48 pm
Thanks Smiley
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 31, 2008 5:58 pm
i totally agree with teardrops you are a superduper poet youer poems are both funny and relistic you deserve a virtual high five!
Comment by RoseNthorns: Jan 31, 2008 7:27 pm
omg are you alright? me and you will go kik his ass we'll mob him lmao rlly good poem tho :]
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 1, 2008 6:57 am
Lol
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 1, 2008 8:01 am
lol great poem
Comment by BlackLily: Feb 1, 2008 8:17 am
Me likie! Great job!
Comment by SilentCries: Feb 1, 2008 8:34 am
Its insanely good. Been there before too! lol
Comment by darksideofme: Feb 1, 2008 6:43 pm
wow...... Holly shit bro... I guess you dont need me to fuck anyone up for you. You are truely great. good job.

Nevermore,
DARK SIDE OF ME
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 2, 2008 5:17 am
thanks Open smile
Comment by hotchick: Feb 2, 2008 6:43 pm
that's really good. its good u won't shoot anyone i'd get scared then. i liked it Sticking tongue out
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 2, 2008 6:57 pm
LOL kk thanks
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 5, 2008 9:26 am
awsome
Comment by christi823: Feb 11, 2008 2:52 pm
Plz dun shoot anyone. O_o
Good poem. [:
Vote up!
XD
Comment by gothchik13: Feb 21, 2008 4:46 am
wow that was great!
Comment by gothchik13: Feb 21, 2008 4:53 am
u kinda sound like my bf thats kool!kinda...that poemwas awesome!
Comment by MindTwister: Mar 16, 2008 11:19 am
lol
Comment by Catwoman772: Jun 5, 2008 10:45 am
i like it
lol
Smiley
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