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Alone

What are we to do?
What are we to say?
When the world falls apart,
and we grasp at our final day.
When we at last depart,
into an even deeper gray.
When the world is no longer art,
having fallen off the display.

Have we lived well?
Or has life been hell?
Have we reached our potential,
or are we just inconsequential?

Maybe life was full of strife.
Or perhaps it was penitential.
Maybe torrential?
Prudential?
Whatever the case,
life is essential.
We live because it's expected.
Yet, we become so resentful.

Rejected.
Infected,
with a known sickness.
We've defected,
to a form of weakness.
Writhing, weak, and weary,
we discover a truth un-known.
Nothing is there to keep us believing,
It's all so over-blown.
Nothing is there to keep our lungs breathing,
our heart beating.
So, we continue dieing.
Alone.

by Xenoz
posted on 10/22/2009

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Comment by Rokkii: Oct 22, 2009 10:41 pm
Ahhhh, so true and so well written!!!

Writhing, weak, and weary,
we discover a truth un-known.

I love that part. Idk why tho. Haha.

AMAZING ONCE AGAIN!!! =D

I love the ending tooo!
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 22, 2009 10:43 pm
Aw, well, thanks!!!=D
Yeah, hm, just thought I would use some fancy ass alliteration there. See how it worked.=) Lol.
i'm glad you like it. i like the ending the most.=)
Comment by Rokkii: Oct 22, 2009 10:45 pm
lol, well i like the fancy ass alliteration. =P Ur funny.
Yeah, its awesome!
Comment by danielle: Oct 23, 2009 7:22 am
i like this one.. you have a spelling error tho.. 'deffected' is supposed to be 'defected' i think..

"We've deffected,
to a form of weakness."
that line is stuck on me like glue..
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 23, 2009 7:33 am
Oh, ok, I didn't notice that! Thanks! I'll fix it real quick.
Thanks for the compliments=)
Comment by freespirit252: Oct 23, 2009 2:47 pm
This is really good, one of the best I've read. Great job!
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 23, 2009 7:06 pm
Thanks!=D
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 25, 2009 2:50 pm
This is really incredible, I mean it~! Awesome work! Deep and and thought-provoking.
Comment by prettyspl: Oct 25, 2009 10:24 pm
Pure delightful read! : ) Great writing ..
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:18 am
This was great!! Your really good
Comment by Leeshio: Oct 27, 2009 4:08 pm
i love it.
Comment by ccampion: Oct 30, 2009 5:37 pm
It's not bad at all
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