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A Dream, a premonition, a Nightmare...
........
where....
am i?
.......
i cant move.....
.........
my breathing....
its shallow.....
......
i cant.........
feel it.......
my heart.......
............
a life monitor
sits beside me.....
.......
and slowly....
i can hear....
the beeping....
..........
"Beep....
Beep....
Beep..."
.......
off....
in the distance......
.......
i can hear.....
.......
words.....
.....
"injuries...
severe....
too much....
lost....
blood.....
broken...."
.........
its clear....
to me now....
my fate....
........
my eyes.....
fill with tears....
it hurts...
but i dont care....
i cant say......
goodbye.....
to them.....
to her.....
.........
has my mi-.........
-ssion fa-..
-iled...?
that u must.....
take me back?.........
.......
its slipping.....
away from me.....
im losing them.......
........
my pulse....
my thoughts.......
my love.....
my heart......
and my soul......
..........
i can hear
more words.....
......
"hopeless.....
cant save.......
one hour......
impossible.....
only 17.....
beyond recognition.....
im sorry......."
.......
suddenly....
my body.....
starts to...
fail me.....
i can hear....
alarms.......
.........
people rush.....
to help me......
.........
suddenly...
the life.......
monitor.......
......
is silent........
........
....
.
by Mangekyo
posted on 04/05/2008
where....
am i?
.......
i cant move.....
.........
my breathing....
its shallow.....
......
i cant.........
feel it.......
my heart.......
............
a life monitor
sits beside me.....
.......
and slowly....
i can hear....
the beeping....
..........
"Beep....
Beep....
Beep..."
.......
off....
in the distance......
.......
i can hear.....
.......
words.....
.....
"injuries...
severe....
too much....
lost....
blood.....
broken...."
.........
its clear....
to me now....
my fate....
........
my eyes.....
fill with tears....
it hurts...
but i dont care....
i cant say......
goodbye.....
to them.....
to her.....
.........
has my mi-.........
-ssion fa-..
-iled...?
that u must.....
take me back?.........
.......
its slipping.....
away from me.....
im losing them.......
........
my pulse....
my thoughts.......
my love.....
my heart......
and my soul......
..........
i can hear
more words.....
......
"hopeless.....
cant save.......
one hour......
impossible.....
only 17.....
beyond recognition.....
im sorry......."
.......
suddenly....
my body.....
starts to...
fail me.....
i can hear....
alarms.......
.........
people rush.....
to help me......
.........
suddenly...
the life.......
monitor.......
......
is silent........
........
....
.
by Mangekyo
posted on 04/05/2008
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Comment by DarkDreams: Apr 5, 2008 11:10 am
its a really cool poem in a very weird way! but you just gatta read it right and it makes sense
Comment by MonsterBabies: Apr 5, 2008 2:24 pm
Good job its very interestingComment by meltedsnowman: Apr 5, 2008 8:25 pm
ummmm...that was amzingly weird
i dont want to comment..Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 7, 2008 7:38 am
i won't let you die! we are one, together forever! you are my very good friend and i won't let you die. Comment by stargirl09: Apr 9, 2008 7:29 am
wow this is very good
but it is something scary to drem, i see how u can be freaked by it. i haven't heard of anyone who dreamed their death. so it's probably just one of those scary odd dreams. maybe something happened to u some time before that made u scared for ur life ad that it probably wat triggured the dream. don't let it bother u too much, just think of it as just another dream