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A Dark Glory Child Story

Little Mandy had some boredom to mend
Billy was a friend of a friend
Mandy invited him over to play
Billy came over the very next day

Together they ran and spun
Together Billy and Mandy had so much fun
For a year more they continued to play
Until that fateful rainy day

Billy was bored with the lack of sun
He quickly ran and grabbed Mandy’s dad’s gun
Mandy got scared and began to panic
Her sudden emotion expressed that of a manic

Her dad had told her to stay away from the gun
Billy was no exception to this rule of thumb
Mandy yelled at little Billy
But he held it tight and kept acting silly

Mad mad Mandy pushed Billy to the ground
Took the gun and shot him down
She stared at his lifeless body as it began to fall
No tears shed; she didn’t care at all

Billy was just a friend; a cure
Now he was a cause to fear
Mandy couldn’t just let his body lie around
She had to hide it so Billy wouldn’t be found

Quickly she set her mind to use
Mandy ran to the closet and fashioned a noose
She rapped it tight around little Billy’s neck
Billy’s corpse was now a bloody wreck

Mandy walked to her room dragging Billy behind
The thought of where to hide the corpse plaguing her mind
Mandy’s eyes raced around until she found the spot
Thankfully Billy’s blood began to clot

She laid the corpse down and shoved it under her bed
Being careful not to scrape his head
The rest of the day she spent mopping up blood
Later Mandy’s dad got home and she gave him a hug

That day Mandy slept peacefully through the night
Soon the sun rose and flooded her room with light
Mandy woke up with a sense of delight
She rolled to the floor and pulled out the corpse with all her might

Mandy bent down and kissed Billy’s head
She now loved her friend even though he was dead
The love Mandy felt grew and grew
Her love became her sick, dark, maddening flu

Mandy dreamed of Billy and her and her being carried
She hoped one day he would set her down, kneel, and ask to get married
Until then she would wake up and go out of her way
To give her rotting carcass companion a kiss each day

by HappyGoLucky
posted on 05/15/2009

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Comment by ashen: May 16, 2009 8:07 pm
i love this. its so twisted but sadly this does happen. not with children but with older people, its really disturbing just to think....
Comment by harley: May 15, 2009 11:36 pm
ok, now see, this is why you write the dark poetry and i stick to the love ones lol Sticking tongue out

this is so sick and twisted...see, i could never have come up with something like this lol

but think of it this way, you keep writing this and i will keep writing my happy poems and we will just equal eachother out lol

love you Open smile
Comment by DarkestAngle: May 15, 2009 4:29 pm
Thats great writing.
A bit twisted,but really good! Smiley
Comment by jmegs13: May 15, 2009 4:56 pm
I can Deffinately tell why he asked you if you need help i love this tho good job
Comment by Heartbroken120: May 15, 2009 5:40 pm
this is very good. like DarkestAngle and imegs13 said... very good and a bit twisted
Comment by azaLea: May 15, 2009 5:51 pm
Wow..

Really dark ..

Nice ending, great poem..

Keep Writing..

Comment by mischeifinvain: May 15, 2009 9:36 pm
best... childrens story....ever.... ^^
Comment by jjxx1992: May 15, 2009 10:09 pm
Wow this is sick and twisted and I completely love it. It's a story and a poem all in one. kinda like mine.. but urs have so much more meaning I think. Plus I'm totally jealous on how you get it to rhyme without taking away from the meaning of the poem. Smiley.. ur so good at this
Comment by GothicRomance: May 15, 2009 10:39 pm
:o
speechless.....
like mischeifinvain said... best childrens story EVER!
I love this, it's so twisted and... WOW!
you are amazing xD
great job! keep it up! =]
Comment by darksideofme: May 16, 2009 4:29 am
Reminds me a lot of my friends writing. Twisted all the same for sure..... Wicked cool though..... I think the love is beautiful. hahahaha
Comment by BabyGirl21: May 16, 2009 7:46 am
this is really dark but i like the ending
KEEP WRITTING
Comment by rayne482: May 17, 2009 12:47 pm
twisted, beautiful, love it.
Comment by MyCheshyreFriend: May 18, 2009 11:10 pm
Wow dreadful dark Smiley
Comment by Iggy: May 22, 2009 2:14 pm
Yay!!! I LOVE necrophilia!!! I can so relate to this poem! It's like you have been watching the last three years of my life, and then just put it into a poem while changing some names and people to throw me off!!! It's just ridiculous! You're not really stalking me are you?
Comment by Greyhoundfb: May 23, 2009 9:28 pm
wow great, but really how do you think of things like that. its great.
Comment by Greyhoundfb: May 23, 2009 9:28 pm
wow great, but really how do you think of things like that. its great.
Comment by Duckie: Jun 2, 2009 10:25 am
holy crap!!! that seriously was the best poem i have read! that was amazing!
Comment by Basehunter18: Jun 5, 2009 9:59 pm
and this is way i dont read long poems
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jun 6, 2009 10:53 pm
WOWZA!!!! holy MOLY! GREAT JOB MY FRIEND! Open smile
Comment by tealtear: Jun 8, 2009 6:18 pm
WOW, very twisted and dark! Loved it Happy, fabulous job!
Comment by brrat71: Nov 4, 2009 9:24 am
I liked this one Alex, not because it was twisted I think it was a true view of children s innocence and there love for each other and there perception of things I guess I just looked at it a lot differently than others Smiley
Comment by Darkhawk: Oct 4, 2009 8:14 pm
Amazing poem, one of the best I've read yet!
Comment by neverinlove: Oct 12, 2009 5:08 pm
wow thats twistedly amazing i love it i read it Three times ur teacher is stupid if he cant see wat a talent you have
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Oct 23, 2009 11:58 am
This was very sad, but I loved it regardless!
Comment by ordinarycanary: Jan 8, 2010 9:46 am
This is more than amazing! It's twisted but it's genius! One of the best poems I've read in a long while!
Comment by razegeneration: Jan 19, 2010 5:36 am
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!! MAKE IT INTO A FUCKING BOOK!! I'll draw the picturesz Smiley i can see it in every kindergarten on earth already lol
Comment by freakofthenight: Feb 12, 2010 12:22 am
this is fucking BRILLAINT!
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