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You Told Me

You told me i was perfect,
fine the way i am.
I was what you wanted
and everything you needed.
i ate a bit, felt comfortable
around you.
then i was self conciuos of
the way you never looked
or they way you never touched.
you tell me my weight brings
you down. FUCKS SAKE.
i put on a few kgs no more than 5, this brings you down
fuck give me a high five.
your not the one.. that stares at the mirror
feeling like im ugly
feeling like im fat.
this brings you down?
what exactly? seeing me with no top?
or huging me and me feeling just a bit too soft.
THIS BRINGS YOU DOWN.
well what brings me down is this.
Nothing too complicated.
nothing to big. just one simple thing. You!
Fuck this shit im hungry =]

by angelictears7
posted on 09/20/2009

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Comment by DanielJacquesCain: Sep 20, 2009 5:40 pm
I have read i few now this is a favourite.
But there all quite similar topics maybe it's because they where written at once or because you are really passionate about this thing.
It's a good modern collection you have here but diversity is my only word of criticism.
Comment by Shortie14: Sep 20, 2009 5:03 pm
empty...yur mail box plz
Comment by Shortie14: Sep 20, 2009 5:01 pm
lol...ha i like this... great job....
Comment by angelictears7: Oct 7, 2009 2:51 am
please comment
Comment by deathsmessanger: Oct 7, 2009 6:00 am
Really good job, i love it. you need to keep writing.
Comment by Xeroz: Oct 7, 2009 5:13 pm
Fuck this shit im hungry =] lol that just made my day XD but yea that was a good poem
Comment by Psychobabble: Oct 7, 2009 11:33 pm
I loved it, great poem you have here.
Comment by false: Oct 10, 2009 12:52 am
then eat..... and play sports.... it would help.......... do you want some pieces of cake....?? chicken?? meat??? hmmmmmmmmmmmmm?? have this menu and choose!!! stony heart!!! Sticking tongue out
Comment by angelictears7: Jan 26, 2010 1:38 am
i play netball Smiley
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