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write it on the walls

i'll write it on the walls
for the world to see
just how bad you've done me
maybe someone will finally see

the real me hates you
for what you've done
the pretend me that i try to be
acts like nothing is wrong

you don't know what it's like
to fake a smile every day of your life
to hear the taunts so many times a day
it's to much for me to take

so i'm writting it on the walls
crimson red reallys shows well on black
the wounds won't have a chance to heal
it's to late for that

this is far to much to take
so i'll slice one more time
and maybe that'll be it
i know i promised but fuck that

so goodbye and remember
this one is for you
i know you were laughing
but who's laughing now?

by emogothjen
posted on 05/02/2008

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Comment by cryingblackblood: May 5, 2008 12:27 pm
i'll listen to you but you don' have to write your woes in crimson on the walls just type them on th computer, you know i'm always here for you! well atleast when i'm online ;)
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: May 2, 2008 6:41 pm
omg! I lOVE IT!!
**the real me hates you
for what you've done
the pretend me that i try to be
acts like nothing is wrong**
this part!! is kool...it's so hard coz everything we really feel and really wanna say is all inside and you just feel this anger..but if you think about it and look at it from their point of view..they see only the pretend you..only what you show them

i feel the same as this..its sooo good i reallyy like it
Comment by coldfire146: May 2, 2008 8:01 pm
i love this poem it says so much i share these feeling with you! great poem!luv it!!! Smiley
Comment by hiddeninblood: May 2, 2008 1:01 pm
amazing poem...your emotions run deep through out it...i love it...Smiley
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 7, 2008 1:07 pm
awesome poem. love it
Comment by deathnote: May 8, 2008 8:28 am
Did she write it on the walls with piss? And how the fuck do you be emo goth? shes screwed up....
Comment by linandbet: Jun 4, 2008 9:03 am
wow...you're poem is really amazing, i love it's honesty an openess. i can really relate to it...

to deathnote:
maybe you should be a little more understanding, obviously you have no idea what it's like to go through any of this, because of what you said. so please, if you don't have anything of great importance to say, don't say it all.
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