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Will he notice?

Doesn't he understand
I am doing this for him.
The more i try
The more he backs away.
Is there something I'm doing wrong?
I wounder if i do something wrong
Will he notice?
If i hurt myself,
Will he notice?
Why doesn't he understand the pain.
I try to tell him
But it never comes out.
I care for him
But does he care for me?
Sadness fills me
Depression's setting in.
I have enough problems
Cant he see that.
Through every thing he does
I still love him.
Because he's my dad!

by asimpledeath
posted on 03/08/2008

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Comment by ttgoth: Mar 8, 2008 3:48 pm
Nice, I wish i could say i still loved my dad. Check out my work "DAD".
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