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Why?

A touch with no feeling.
A heart with no love.
A life with no meaning.
Why?
A pain to great.
A sin to tragic.
A soul to lost.
Why?
Why must it be this way?

by DyslexicParanoia
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by XxBleedingButterflyxX: Dec 12, 2006 7:04 pm
Short but swells with thought...
Comment by romil: Dec 13, 2006 7:54 am
after reading your poem i just made this...
why? for that one moment when-
a touch with no feeling will turn into healing,
a heart with no love will be filled with purity of a dove,
a life with no meaning will become reasoning,
a pain to great will turn into happiness without any debate,
a sin to tragic will turn into wonderful magic and
a soul to lost will turn into one with high cost!
for that moment of bliss!
Comment by Tashaox: Dec 13, 2006 2:19 pm
I like this one, its short but straight to the point!

Tasha <x3
Comment by NIKKIx: Dec 16, 2006 12:33 pm
i am sooooo in love with everything you write! im not sure how, but you capture the emotions so well! its amazing...
Comment by BlackenedSoulRevenge: Dec 18, 2006 9:20 pm
i love it!
Comment by DyslexicParanoia: Jan 4, 2007 10:54 am
thanks romil, nice job.
Comment by uNpReDiCtAbLe: Jan 5, 2007 5:29 pm
thats amazing! i luv it! ur really good! keep writing!
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