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Why?

I just dont
Understand a few things
Like why do u like to hurt so much?
Why do u like to make us cry?
Why do you lie?
Why do wanna make our lives hell?
Why do u wanna tear us apart?
Why do hate?
I just wanna be a family
Why do you hate us so?
I just cant understand
All i can do
Is look into your eyes
And ask
Why?

by Essence
posted on 07/04/2009

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Comment by tealtear: Jul 5, 2009 11:17 am
Aww, I can feel a lot of strong emotion in this, but I do have one suggestion to make this poem better. Spell out "you" instead of "u", it gives your poem more of an edge and seems like you put more time into it. Overall, great poem!
Comment by savannah12: Jul 4, 2009 1:07 pm
nice... i cant think of anything else to say but good job
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