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Who's sleeping?

I wonder what the sound of you sleeping is
When you sleep now
Do you sleep now?

Am I bound to these 3am cautions?
When the complicated sounds swell inside me
When the reflections cross my bed in strange lights.

You must sleep now.

Is it living when you dance pressed against him?
A sudden pleasure in knowing I'm gone?

Grip the pillow.

Do you remember when we were just kids
I don't remember much at all, anymore
Have you ever gotten drunk off what's missing?

When I sit in translucence
I wonder, do you sit in stone?
In space, what were you looking for?

Did you find it?

I wonder what the sound of me sleeping is.

by Atwood
posted on 11/04/2009

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Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 11, 2009 4:04 pm
Ah, I'm glad Monkeyboy told me about this. I would have missed it.

This is very.. appealing. There's something about it that just captures my attention. Absolutely beautiful.
Comment by Atwood: Nov 10, 2009 10:40 pm
I love Rachel. x)
You like this because I revised it, for once
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 10, 2009 11:42 pm
Wow.. this is impressive..

I must come back tothis when the sober morning calls
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 10, 2009 8:14 pm
This is beautiful.

Seldom do i vote something up on here.
Comment by Atwood: Nov 4, 2009 4:04 pm
oh the joy of questions.
there better be enough in there.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 5, 2009 5:09 am
Well this is interesting...O.o How curious you seem Smiley
Comment by tearsofrain: Nov 10, 2009 9:36 am
i like this better than rachel

rachel is real nice

but this is so. good.
Comment by tearsofrain: Nov 10, 2009 9:36 am
I LIKE THIS SO MUCH
Comment by Selene: Nov 11, 2009 3:00 am
'When I sit in translucence
I wonder, do you sit in stone?'
wow wow wow wow
beautiful!
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