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What Is It?

Is it her eyes?
Is it her face?
or maybe, just maybe
its her un-yielding grace
no
it is not any of these things
the thing that makes me love her
well, its her heart

And I had hoped
that after she destroyed mine
and he tore hers apart
together, we could piece together each heart
but No
She chases him
and I after her
I know what will happen
I have seen it before.
He looks at her heart
then throws it to the floor
I rush to her aid,
pick up her heart,
brush of the dirt,
present it to her,
and hope that something will start

~~~~~~~~~ending #1~~~~~~~~~~~~
She grabs it nonchalantly
turns and runs after him.
I scream "How have I wronged you!?"
But my words escape with the wind
I fall to my knees
I find my heart smashed on the ground
I pick it up
put it together
brush it off
place it in a safe
then secure the lock
I shall never trifle with love again
For it never works out in the end

~~~~~~~~~~~ending #2~~~~~~~~~

She sees me holding her heart
suddenly I see what she has known from the start
she reaches in her pocket
and pulls our my heart
un-damaged
un-scathed
I see my reflection in her tear-strained eyes
But then I see more
I hold out her heart
she holds out mine
this is how it shall stay
until the end of time.










--kc

by wwwdotcom
posted on 03/21/2008

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Comment by danielle: Mar 22, 2008 4:08 am
wow!!
i love it.. both endings are awesome, but i like the 2nd one more.. great job...
Comment by squirrelluver2: Mar 22, 2008 9:35 am
The ending are both so amazing. That was so deep and the first ending was absolutely true to the end.
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 22, 2008 10:36 am
yeah i agree...
thwe 1st end is so sad and the 2nd is like a happy ending dk only you can say what fits better
Comment by XangelicXshadowsX: Mar 22, 2008 12:05 pm
wow...i am in love with this...both endings are fantastic...the wording is amazing...vote ^
Comment by yourrainbow: Mar 22, 2008 1:34 pm
I really liked the 2nd ending case it was happy and i like the 1st one case it was sad.
Comment by Mitta: Mar 22, 2008 4:01 pm
That's so awsome...love it!
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 22, 2008 8:05 pm
wow both endings are amazing!! wow!
Comment by RoSe: Mar 22, 2008 9:42 pm
interesting poem Sticking tongue out lol.. i think da sec end goes better Open smile
Comment by Tiara: Mar 23, 2008 2:06 am
Awww. This is great. Awesome idea to split the two endings. Smiley
Comment by fallenangelx14: Mar 23, 2008 6:16 am
wow I love it! the endings are both equally fantastic. I know how being the girl feels. And I feel terrible saying that but it's true. There's always too sides to a story I guess... fantastic poem though :]
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Mar 23, 2008 7:39 am
i love both of them too :] great job i love how u made the two endings that show how u never know what love is gonna throw at u
Comment by shirotora: Mar 24, 2008 3:40 am
cool, i loved how there were two ending, that was awesome.I liked the second ending better thouhg, i think it flowed better.
great great job. hope you do another one soon!
Comment by scarredemotions17: Mar 25, 2008 9:19 am
it gave me shivers. it was good
Comment by kareohline012: Apr 24, 2008 4:07 pm
all i got ot say is.....wow.
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