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What Happened to Us?

I stare at you in wonder.
I want to be happy,for you to fulfill my hunger.
I can't understand how we succumbed to hatred.
I drown in my tears, while alone in my bed.
So empty inside, I feel nothing except the pain of skin damage.
If I was to die now, would you acknowledge?
I tell myself that everything will ok.
I'd like to think of us together again, one sunny day.

by MinaOdette
posted on 02/01/2008

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Comment by SinnerIndeed: Feb 1, 2008 1:42 pm
Very pretty, kind of a subtle rage ending with hope, I like it Smiley
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 6, 2008 11:22 am
I agree althogh it was a really good poem
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 7, 2008 11:34 am
nice poem
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jun 29, 2008 7:11 pm
ITS REALLY GOOD
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