what happened?

nice

im srry but i just wanted to see if i could write this in any kind of way plz be honest with the comments!!!

well personally. i think its pretty good. i think the best poems are the ones that have really random lines and stuff that just needs to get said. i have no idea what im trying to say here; i cant explain it lol. but i think it just comes from the heart and trying to figure everything out when no one can help you. its just something that you need to figure out on your own.

and plus...everyones been in the same position as you (trust me) so we all know how your feeling and what your going through. good luck!

i agree with sweetnrosie. on both points. most of us have felt the exact way and poetry is a form of expression, no one else has the right to criticize you on your work because it is what you felt needed to be said, and it hopefully made you feel better to say it. by the way, thanx for commenting on my last poem, and i will be sure to comment any more if you should post.

i agree with gothic666 angel that no one has the right to critisize

thats really good actually...and it really doesnt matter how you write it..just write it.

It's real good.
I can relate, *nods*

hey i like this... thanks 4 commenting my poems

i like it too.
thanks for posting