What Do You Wish Of A Falling Star?

Welcome Back Birdie!

I fell in love with a man,
With a similar wish,
Who thinks I'm someone else
Come morning.

That's a great stanza, I honestly feel I can relate..
It has been wonderful to read more of your work.

Thats lovely, just lovely

I really love how you almost downplay the intensity of these situations and inadequacy that this narrator must feel thorough the way you emphasize the descriptive language and hold back on describing what the narrator feels. I noticed how this poem seemed to revolve around these "men" through the narrator's eyes as opposed to focusing the attention on the narrator herself, but the plot focused on her relationships. I think that subtle hint alone spoke volumes about how this girl is never the center of her relationships with men which leads to her becoming disposable. Great poem, I really enjoyed it.

He's a worrisome alcoholic,
But sweetest when impaired.

The best kind in my opinion.
A much welcome return.

Love the descriptions ( :

This is a wonderful write through and through.
I guess taking a break has built up more phenomenal talent from you. It is nice to read your work again. And what a come back write!

"The stars were busy that night."

Nice!

good poem.
i like the style

nice poem i like it

This is a very meaningful peom, well done. its awesome

I love this sense of how the flaws are what is necessary - but also what creates the problems. Celebrating awkwardness and goofiness is t be encouraged!

very nice its really good! yay!

Great as always your words form a complete picture of each situation such clarity with such simple statements.
I can not pick a favorite verse as they all seem so vivid and real.

Great poem, I have missed readin your work.

Nick