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were done!

were done,
i liked you so much and i thought that it might have been love,
but these last couple of days have been real tough,
your just not the person i thought you were and it took me six months,
to see the real you,
and who you really are,
the way you treat when your friends are around just went to far,
i hate the way you treat me,
i hate the way you act,
you may think oyur some badass,
but to me your just an ass,
i want to be friends,
and just start over again,
but i think this should be the end,
of our relationship of being more than friends,
i love you to death but not in that way,
im sorry to put this on you,

BUT IM THROUGH!

by lost4evr
posted on 03/17/2008

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Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 17, 2008 9:58 am
this is strong!!
I love it and I can understand how u feel
Your thoughts really come through
Great Poem Keep Writing and take careSmileySmiley
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 17, 2008 10:06 am
Smiley good poem......strong emotions........take care...
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 17, 2008 10:15 am
good poem!! and i agree has realli strong emotions
Comment by Rayofsunshine: Mar 17, 2008 11:42 am
thats REALLY good!
i like the ending!!!
Comment by emogothjen: Mar 17, 2008 12:42 pm
wow, i wish i could put it like that. but unfortunaley, 7 months, i see how he really is and i after having my heart broke, b/c it was actually my first love, i still want him. but good for you. great poem and i know how you feel.
Comment by TMacias: Mar 17, 2008 1:24 pm
AWESOME.. I love the words you chose to express how you feel. Seems like you are ready to face the world and embrace what is to come. Just know you will have guys that come and guys that go, but soon GOD will send you the ONE.
Comment by Meggers: Mar 17, 2008 4:16 pm
this is so like me and my bf! and i'm also brakin up with him!
Comment by behindunseenwalls: Mar 18, 2008 9:02 pm
I can totally empathise, its a really good poem.
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Mar 19, 2008 5:53 am
yea... good poem... if ya ever need someone to talk to i'm ya guy lol
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