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We could've had love girl

We could've had love girl.We could've sat down, watch the sun set and the doves girl.I didn't recognize how good I had it.If I could go back in time, I would go to were I messed up and rewind.I wanted to say I love you, but I didn't know if I would get it back in return too.Well baby girl I DO LOVE you.Sometimes I thought I was feeling different emotions.I thought "was this lust too"?It couldn't be lust because every time I see you I still freeze up.They say you live and you learn, but if I can't live with you my heart'll burn. I pray that in the future, me and you will get back together.But then I won't lose ya.

by schick15
posted on 04/07/2008

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Comment by BriiXx3: Apr 7, 2008 4:52 pm
ehhh
Comment by Verasailles: Apr 7, 2008 7:12 pm
I like the overall idea and stuff.
But the English part of it needs a little help.
But this is pretty good.
Comment by schick15: Apr 7, 2008 7:22 pm
tell me what english part needs help. tell me so i can be a better poet
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