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we 're becoming the became

the war of two worlds collide and shatter the love of mankind.
still the future is unpredictable.
the(our) choice of words can save, but we keep in our hearts and to our graves.
our hate is just being repeated. its not against our beliefs to see the truth, but once again we walk away defeated.
It's this world, Our world that to power to kill this ill. yet once again we stand still.
here on Our ancient ground lie the dead, the defeated, and the crying.
its proof that Our world is wearing down!

by darthXdiablo
posted on 06/15/2008

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Comment by DreamsAndReality: Jun 17, 2008 5:39 pm
The flow was difficult to follow to me but it was a very powerful poem and that's the whole point of poetry. Well done.
Comment by zoe: Jun 17, 2008 11:03 am
I LOVE IT IS GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORKSmiley
Comment by asdfyz: Jun 16, 2008 4:35 pm
very nice. The message is great and clear.

personally I'm not sure about the flow of it, but I think it works really wellw ith what you are trying tog et accross.

Great job.
Comment by TaintedThorn: Jun 16, 2008 10:01 am
fuck brother this fuking bad ass....cant wait to hear some more....simply amazing...
Comment by Freewriter91: Aug 9, 2008 11:53 pm
wow amazing right on man
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Aug 18, 2008 7:38 am
wicked poem
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