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waiting for you

Im lying here
waiting for you
becaue you know
how i said
i lay on my bed?
yea i do
i wait for you
i told you i liked you
i dont wait around and lack
i come out of that dark shack
i wait for you to talk
because your voice
can't be heard
if you try to die
for someone else
if you try to live
you can succeed
i know you can
i can breathe
one you talk to me
i never wonder why
i liked you
but you were the first
and the last
and i wonder
who? who will be the next?
you might find them
like "him" you find
that one
that doesnt kill you
but doesnt hurt

by gaara
posted on 02/20/2008

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Comment by emogothjen: Feb 20, 2008 1:34 pm
awww, well, turn it around from a girls point, and i've been there before. but i'm almost there b/c he's finally gonna ask me. but just hang in there and if it's ment to be, she'll come around. if not, then as much as it hurts, you'll move on.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 22, 2008 7:58 am
great poem
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 4:45 pm
good poem, and i agree with what emogothjen said.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 5, 2008 9:50 am
great poem...afree with emo up there
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