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Waiting

I'm laying here crying
but no one's here
My arm won't stop bleeding
My head won't stop spinning
He has no idea it's all for him
I'm listening for your voice
but your no where to be found
i'm falling waiting for somone to catch me
i'm crying waiting for somone to wipe away my tears
i'm crawling into a fantisy
waiting for somone to drag me back to reality
what's this world have left for me when i'm stuck in this pit
i'll wait and wait
until I turn to nothing

by unoiluvpurple69
posted on 03/01/2007

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Comment by DarkDevotions: Mar 1, 2007 8:12 pm
Ok....wow. I thought the others were good but damn. This one is honestly amazing....and once again I know how you feel here. Waiting for so long gets lonely. But yeah...anyways...this is an amazing poem. Your talent really come through here!! You just get better and better! I can't wait to see more!!
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 3, 2007 6:02 pm
your amazing
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Mar 8, 2007 8:08 pm
this one is really good hunn....you are such a creative person..this is amazing
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