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daddy please
daddy look at me
cant you see
you're tearing me apart?
daddy i'm just a girl
with a fragile heart
one more lie from you
and it could break
thats all it could take
daddy please,
i'm not asking for much
all i want is love
by lost_girl15
posted on 12/12/2007
cant you see
you're tearing me apart?
daddy i'm just a girl
with a fragile heart
one more lie from you
and it could break
thats all it could take
daddy please,
i'm not asking for much
all i want is love
by lost_girl15
posted on 12/12/2007
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Comment by sexygilroy: Dec 12, 2007 11:30 am
wow that was powerful. it gave me the goose bumps. nice job gurl.Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 12, 2007 12:36 pm
wow. mm. i know how u feel.Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 12, 2007 12:38 pm
oh u can call it dying or love is needed or daddy i'm dying or dad where's the love?
Comment by lost_girl15: Dec 12, 2007 12:47 pm
thank you allComment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 12, 2007 2:00 pm
very very good! you could call it daddy please or just daddy.Comment by McRluvr: Dec 13, 2007 10:16 am
ya great poem the names they suggested are good onesComment by lost_girl15: Dec 13, 2007 11:17 am
thanksComment by Tequilla: Jan 8, 2008 12:29 pm
good poem!!Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 6, 2008 9:09 pm
hey this is a really good poem.. i can relate to it alot.. good jobComment by Rockleegirl: Mar 7, 2008 6:10 pm
wow that was soo sad but it was a good poemComment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 18, 2008 11:11 am
good poem it was sad i agree but it makes it so good that people wanna read it and show that they care..
awsome poem and great job
Comment by lost_girl15: Mar 29, 2008 4:17 pm
DADDY WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DID YOU DO THIS 2 ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Comment by lost_girl15: Mar 29, 2008 4:19 pm
NICE JOB SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT*****************************************~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!***********************************8