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black roses

scared,stunned,terrified
you said it every time i tried
but did you mean what you said
so many questoins in my head
you said you loved me
but what i didn't see was that you were lying through your teeth
people told me it wasn't right
i guess i just wasn't too bright
i knew you would do it
i just didn't know when
you said it would never happen
you say you don't love me
and you don't see
that even though im hurt
and im losing sleep at noght
my love for you still shines bright
like the stars we once gazed upon
just before the hurt came along

by LITTLEmissBLENDER
posted on 06/26/2007

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Comment by LITTLEmissBLENDER: Jun 26, 2007 11:50 pm
i hpoe u like it
Comment by LITTLEmissBLENDER: Jun 26, 2007 11:51 pm
i hope u like it
Comment by vampirehunter: Jun 27, 2007 12:15 pm
My poem gave you chills!?
Awesome!
This one is pretty good to

xD

[ps: you might want to check the spelling]
Comment by myloveeyeliner: Jun 27, 2007 5:35 pm
really awesome poem i can really relate to what its like
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 27, 2007 11:15 pm
So emotional! It's great!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 27, 2007 11:16 pm
How about "Candle In The Darkness" or "Black Roses"?
Comment by LITTLEmissBLENDER: Jun 28, 2007 3:32 pm
thanx for all the comments guys!
Comment by MsKeys1707: Aug 12, 2007 10:13 am
This is Good and deep
I love the titleSmiley
Great Poem once againSmiley
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