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Unmeaningful Life

what is life
a big strife?

life is uncontrollable
but never a fable

always real
you can always feel

never fake
but sometimes ppl make a mistake

life is strong
yet very long

only you control it
so u can make it fit

follow your dreams
they'll lead to success
but never guess
itll lead to stress

life is full of happiness
as well as sadness

so make if right
and stay away from the fright
and everything will be alright

life has ups and downs
it has its laughs and sounds

but make the best of it
and everything will fit

dont worry
theres no hurry

follow your heart
like a peice of art.

by tennisgurl131
posted on 03/19/2008

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Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 19, 2008 3:31 pm
wow this is sad but written so well
Comment by jussiechick: Mar 19, 2008 3:56 pm
iu like this one alot good job
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 19, 2008 4:41 pm
I love this!!!
Very true and inspiringSmileySmileySmiley
Keep Writing and Take CareSmiley
Comment by ccstorm2001: Mar 19, 2008 6:23 pm
great, this is what life is and can be and what we all want
Comment by bluepetals: Mar 20, 2008 5:46 am
beautiful how it flows and rhyms
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 20, 2008 11:11 am
wow!! amazing.. this is an amazing peice of work
Comment by MyWastedYouthX: Mar 20, 2008 2:01 pm
Good.
So, what is life? lol
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