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What a time to remember,
Lets rewind to the dusty nights,
Back in December,
Fatal crys turned out the lights,
You were my addiction,
Was never ment to heal,
But kept a vital decision,
Too untouchable to reaveal,
Although you never knew,
I kept you close,
As the bloody evenings turned to midnight blue,
Feel the storm comming soon,
Last kiss on a rose,

by romantichomicide
posted on 08/06/2008

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Comment by Metalcry: Oct 18, 2008 7:33 pm
Simple ... but good
Comment by IrOcKmYoWnSoX: Aug 6, 2008 2:28 pm
"lets rewind the dust nights"

"fatal crys turned out the lights"

"as the bloody evenings turned to midnight blue"

those are my favorite lines really good work
Comment by zoe: Aug 6, 2008 2:32 pm
i loved all da lines thay great i love ur song/poems
Comment by IrOcKmYoWnSoX: Aug 6, 2008 2:35 pm
dusty* my bad
Comment by rosilinekilledromeo: Aug 6, 2008 2:53 pm
Dude this reminds me of when I use to sneak out with my girlfriend, except where you get super dramatic like the bloody parts.
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Aug 6, 2008 2:58 pm
yea thats evry good. i like that a lot Smiley
Comment by lastinline: Aug 6, 2008 3:15 pm
Flows nicely, keep it up!!
Comment by hiddeninblood: Aug 6, 2008 4:38 pm
MAN YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME...I LUV YOUR STYLE OF WRITEING...LOVE THISPOEM..Smiley
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Aug 6, 2008 5:53 pm
!!!! WOW !!!!
LOVE THIS POEM!!
I like ur style , think I'll have a read of more of your poemz =) VOTING UP reaallyy realllyy goood
Comment by brokenXemo: Aug 7, 2008 3:56 pm
*sparkles* xx
Comment by Ashlee23: Aug 12, 2008 9:11 am
that was good
Comment by linger: Oct 5, 2008 7:10 pm
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Oct 13, 2008 10:27 am
that's really good, i feel the emotions
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Oct 29, 2008 8:25 am
Real good, i feel what you are trying to convey, great poem
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