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Understand Me

The daisy and rose are together,
A pink daisy and a black rose,
Different shades, but adhered,
In a secret love, enclosed.

Shone by the bright rays of summer,
Warmed by their love in chilling winter,
In temperate autumn roofed by the passion of lovers,
In the buds of spring, lying together.

After a turn of the calendar,
Snowflakes delicately formed between the lovers,
Why? why? why?!
My ponderous hearts cries,
Was it the mistake in counting the petals ?
Or have we not be like thread and needles?
Was I a bud in a blooming flower?
Or were you the grasshopper that showed power?

Baby, I still want you,
To hug you,
To kiss you,
To hold you,
To lay by you,
To feel you,
And just to love you.

Why can't you give me the chance?
Was I not the prince you dream for?
Or is my castle not how you wanted?
I'm sorry sayang, but my love for you I might just ignore.



Based on true feelings and emotions


by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by scorpio: Dec 13, 2006 5:26 am
For all who don't speak "Malay", the word "sayang" in the last line means, darling in Malay.
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 14, 2006 9:16 pm
the last part is vert sad..a very nice poem & excellently written..i luv it..
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 15, 2006 4:05 am
typing mistake... "very" huk..huk..
Comment by InMyDreams: Dec 15, 2006 5:42 am
i agree- but its really good >.< i luvz it- cant wait to read more... ur really good ^-^
Comment by nopromises: Dec 15, 2006 9:48 pm
very sweet
Comment by xfobxfanx: Dec 16, 2006 12:40 am
wow!!! really good!!!very sad....i hope this didnt happen to u and if it did i'm sorry.....that hurts like a bitch....i should know.....
Comment by scorpio: Dec 16, 2006 8:30 am
appreciate ur comments! yeah its happening now.
Comment by Tashaox: Dec 16, 2006 2:53 pm
Hey, i love the poem! Please keep the good work up! I can realate to it so much!

Tasha <x3
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 16, 2006 7:27 pm
its happening now??? do u mean u & her on the edge of....I x sampai hati nak cakap...but is it??? Sad face
Comment by scorpio: Dec 17, 2006 9:14 am
well theres our ups n downs mel, but we're ok now, but im not really sure what lies for us in the near future, but honestly speaking, might lie in the last stanza
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 17, 2006 7:26 pm
yeah..i guess,things dont always seem the way they are..we dont know what in store for us in the future..we can only planned everything,but God rearranged it for us..
Comment by ElitexxTragedy: Jan 17, 2007 5:11 pm
i like this alot, the title of the poem really captured my attention. and i like the begining it intrigued me and i know what its like to have a secret love. i really like you last words. well the last stanza. and how you just have to ignore the love. even though we all know how hard that can really be. -Nicole<3
Comment by Deeplyinspired: Jan 22, 2007 7:48 pm
you are so good your like the 3rd poet from being my favorite, you have to get through Edgar Allen Poe, InMyDreams, then you good job
Comment by Mari: Jan 24, 2007 1:14 pm
what a lovely poem, just keep on wirting. I luv it^-^
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