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Torment

sitting here alone, all i think about is you
i wish you were here, and my dreams came true.
i long for an embrace that would set me free
i know that your touch will bring my sanity.

if only you could see the beauty in your eye
none of them fools could have made you cry.
you make me strong enough to take on the world
but one look from you is heavier than any word.

deep inside of me lies a wild and tormented sea,
a sea so free, the raft of control lies in debris.
i truly want to overcome my thirst and my hunger
i dont want my chaos to cost me my forever.

by vic_tenn
posted on 05/01/2007

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Comment by kayla: May 1, 2007 2:30 pm
this is my favorite so far, its great, go you!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: May 1, 2007 2:32 pm
Love it.
Comment by Findingyou: May 1, 2007 2:38 pm
wow..good poem!
Comment by vic_tenn: May 1, 2007 3:08 pm
thanks guys. i really appreciate the comments. do any of you have suggestions so that i may write better poems?
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: May 1, 2007 3:19 pm
the poems i have read of yours is really good. but i think this one is honestly my favorite
Comment by angelina: Jul 17, 2007 9:33 am
I love the feeling and the flow in this one. Dark but hopefull. Great poem.
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