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time after time

i was there
when he cried
i was there
when you died
i was there
on the phone
listening to you moan
i was there
wanting best
i was there
hating the rest
there was nothing
you could do
except die for him
until he found
you never tried
to keep him down
if he knew
how much you cared
i bet some day
he would have shared
his love and his life
but hes gone now
and your dead
and im waiting
for you to talk
to me on my bed

by gaara
posted on 02/19/2008

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Comment by SinnerIndeed: Feb 19, 2008 1:28 pm
That's really sad but well written good job Smiley
Comment by Poison: Feb 19, 2008 1:44 pm
I agree
Comment by AnnaChick951: Feb 19, 2008 1:47 pm
Very good.
Comment by aqua4ever: Feb 19, 2008 2:14 pm
I dont get it.
Comment by KingOfTwilight: Feb 19, 2008 4:21 pm
thats really sad.. i like it though. keep up the good work
Comment by lost4evr: Feb 20, 2008 10:59 am
its a lil confusing i had to read it a couple times but its really good!
Comment by gaara: Feb 20, 2008 12:55 pm
=] thanks ppl
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 22, 2008 7:56 am
cool poem
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 4:43 pm
that;s really sad.. it's good though. keep on writing =)
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 5, 2008 9:49 am
good poem.thats like really sad
Comment by sajinn: Mar 10, 2008 1:15 pm
good poem^^
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