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This Sorry Sad Sailor

"Son," I said, "Sit down, on this here knee.
Let me tell you, of a sorry sad sailor
Who sailed the wide sea.
This sorry sad sailor sailed
far and further
Singing his sorry sad sailor song.

There, in the hatch, he lay,
Forevermore, into the day,
Playing his C keyed harp
And singing his sorry sad sailor song.

His crew mates blew on the sails
And flowed against the rudder.
Sailing next to the whales
Who mourned this sorry sad sailor.

Far and further he drifted,
Sorry and sad as a sailor can be,
Till the seventh, he surfaced to the deck,
And dived below the sea,
To escape the stars that shone so sinisterly."

by Bourne
posted on 03/02/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 2, 2008 12:28 pm
Wow.. I'm speechless! What an amazing poem! Amazing job, keep up the great work!
*voting up*

xx~Mackii~xx
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 2, 2008 12:33 pm
amazing poem Smiley
Comment by sassicat: Mar 2, 2008 2:09 pm
That's very sad. But a very good poem, well done Smiley
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: Mar 2, 2008 2:58 pm
wow
Comment by kayla: Mar 3, 2008 6:19 am
Great poem! The first time I read it i felt maybe a stanza was missing, then I read it again and thought no..its great, good jobSmiley
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 4, 2008 9:44 am
very..sad.but good too! i like it
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 4, 2008 10:57 am
i like this and i don't
i'd love to explain why
but i can't.
=}
Comment by oceanreverie: Mar 13, 2008 6:54 pm
wow, this is really touching
actually has me tearing a bit (and that is an accomplishment, trust me)
well written, it felt like a song, as odd as this sounds, the "beat" or "rhythm" of this poem reminded me of being on a boat, rocking back and forth due to the waves. I dont know if that was intentional or not, but if it was, you are a genius, (though honestly you are either way..)
keep it up!
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