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The ache in my heart is so strong
The pain in my heart leaves me
so broken and alone
Ive never been the kind to
ever let my feelings show
I thought that bein strong
ment never cry over someone
be who you are and no tear will
ever be shed so why am i
writing this broken poem
with every tear i have
going down my face
Im broken and no one can ever fix that
I dont feel right when your gone
I guess im not used to feeling so alone
I want you to steal my pain
away but the closer you get to me the more i feel.............
BROKEN

by Skater4life
posted on 11/17/2009

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Comment by neverinlove: Nov 17, 2009 2:07 pm
i love this bc your such a strong girl and to hear that you cry and ur weak on the inside i love this ive always known you as courgous and this shows another side to you just completly amazing i love it
Comment by Atavist: Nov 17, 2009 7:25 pm
This is very good and thoughtful and honest. I like the buildup to the ending and the feeling of impotence to change the outcome of a failed relationship.
Comment by fruitloop199: Dec 4, 2009 9:08 am
But thats the thing about us humans; we get thru it every time and we are durable. You can get thru this, i have many times.
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