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This Morning...

as the aching continues
and the tears wait to stream
down my heated cheeks
i sit and wonder, why?

is this not meant to be?..
maybe she is really
just to young for me
and i sit and wonder

is this really love?..
as tears start to run
the wetness on my cheeks proof
i think im broken again

can she really love me?..
confusion is my life
but i thought i seen her clearly,
i guess not

i look down at the ring she gave me
and cry harder, for to me
it was the symbol of
our promise

a promise to love each other
and not hurt each other.
but what is a promise
..that is one sided?

nothing but words

by kiraralee77
posted on 11/16/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 16, 2009 5:51 pm
awww dang...*eyes sting*...I am so very sorry...This just...made me so sad. I can only imagine how you feel, hun. Tarra, I am here for you *hugs* ...Jeez...I'm sure she loves you, I'm sure of it...
but who knows...maybe she IS too young to know what...like...commitment really means...yknow?
Comment by Atavist: Nov 18, 2009 1:23 am
This is beautiful and portentous on its wording of a promise broken, and what it means to who it was broken.
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