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This is my goodbye

i've tried to fix the mistakes that i've made
but i always seam to be the girl everyone will hate
i've been left in the corners of the shadows in your mind
where your wishes of me to disappear are always alive
silents is what i get whenever i'a around
where you have buried me deep into the ground
i act like i don't realize what your feeling inside
nevertheless why ask the truth if your just going to lie
i've never been excepted as one you love
so i guess i'm finally going to give up
i've tried my best son't say that i haven't
you never gave me a chance i just don't get it
this is the last time i'll ever have to say this
this is my goodbye take it how it is

by brockendreams
posted on 11/29/2007

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Comment by Morticia: Nov 29, 2007 11:15 am
...I'm speechless, i think its because i can realte so much to this poem, I've never read a poem so deep and true like this one, its the only poem I've been able to fully relate to... i don't know what to say but you are an amazing writer, keep it up! i look forward to reading more from you!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 29, 2007 12:25 pm
that was an amazing poem and you are an amazing writer! great job!
Comment by Tonya: Nov 29, 2007 6:54 pm
wow you have an amazing talent keep up the great writing and i liked your poem!
Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 6, 2007 6:48 pm
Awesome!
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