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There's A Story

There is a story about a boy, it's so sad because it's true.
He is now heart-broken by someone he knew.
Seasons pass, but the boy remains the same.
All alone, just slowly going insane.
Tormented by all the things you said.
A prisoner trapped within his own head.
This boy was so pure, he could see the wrong and the right.
But he's so weak now, he hasn't got the might.
His heart now, is much like that of a crumbling wall.
All he wanted you to do was to catch him when he would fall.
His sorrow knows no bounds, his pain has no end.
He only wanted you to be his best friend.
He is empty, the light left his very eyes.
He knows all of this and that is why he crys.
His soul used to sparkle, much like the sun.
It's now filled with red hate because of all that you've done.
That boy now cries out every night at the very sea.
I know this because,that sad boy is me...

by PrayForMe
posted on 01/23/2008

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Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 23, 2008 7:01 pm
THIS POEM RELATES TO ME ALOT. Makes me sad. Because i do this to people.. vote up very good.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 23, 2008 7:02 pm
omg i never knew you were a guy. sorry. assumed from your username. um i got new poems just saying.
Comment by sUpERsTar: Jan 23, 2008 7:45 pm
amazing, very sadd. is this actually you or are you just making it up. Smiley vote up!
Comment by Poison: Jan 24, 2008 6:54 am
I know how that is and very good!
Comment by LostNightmares: Jan 24, 2008 7:19 am
Good i loved it
Comment by Zoe123: Jan 24, 2008 12:53 pm
Good read well done
Comment by Poison: Jan 24, 2008 1:53 pm
great poem
Comment by loveme77: Jan 24, 2008 4:59 pm
Wow, I can relate. Alot. Great job, wonderful poem. Well written. Vote up
Comment by XangelicXshadowsX: Jan 24, 2008 6:21 pm
it is amazing...this kind of reminds me of one of the ppl i know...very nice!
Comment by moonlight: Jan 24, 2008 7:08 pm
good poem Smiley
Comment by heartless: Jan 24, 2008 7:17 pm
Great!
Comment by heartopen: Jan 25, 2008 6:35 am
i love your poem
Comment by heartopen: Jan 25, 2008 6:35 am
No really i Love YOur Poem!
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 25, 2008 7:36 am
I love this. its awesome! vote up. very well written.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 25, 2008 9:57 am
awesome poem
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 25, 2008 3:12 pm
Amazing poem! I love it Open smile
Comment by LynnDoll: Jan 25, 2008 7:17 pm
Really Awesome poem dude! It's something I can really relate to, so, very well written, Vote Up!
Comment by Jenaro2009: Jan 26, 2008 1:37 pm
good poem
Comment by NicholasScott: Jan 26, 2008 8:41 pm
Awsome poemSmiley
Comment by shirotora: Jan 27, 2008 12:57 am
this is some insanely brilliant poem.
you've done a great job. the words flow beautifully and the ending is fantastic.
great job.
Comment by cravingsoul: Jan 27, 2008 8:46 am
great poem
Comment by Pokedude1013: Jan 30, 2008 10:22 pm
*applause
Comment by hotchick: Feb 2, 2008 6:50 pm
wow.........................Sticking tongue out
Comment by jodizzle: Feb 6, 2008 11:33 am
good poem. enjoyed reading it
Comment by wwwdotcom: Feb 8, 2008 9:56 pm
wow thats amazing...you have a great writing style...thats amazing...
Comment by karrla: Feb 9, 2008 7:23 am
nice poem for a guy your age
Comment by laceylue08: Feb 11, 2008 11:25 am
I love it!

VoTe Up!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 2:08 pm
aw so sad. but great poem
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