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The Wolf in Sheeps Clothing.
I am called a shallow man
With a cynical heart
And a wondering hand
A masked charade
Fitted with synthetic truth,
A deceitful tirade
From a heartbreaking tooth.
I am called a despicable guy
Completely void of a soul
And a wondering eye.
A beautiful prequel
Deserving a round of applause,
Then a terrible sequel
Such a wonderful fraud.
I am called all this before I meet her,
But as far as the next one goes
I have yet to become a… cheater.
-JoeV-
by JoeV
posted on 07/06/2009
With a cynical heart
And a wondering hand
A masked charade
Fitted with synthetic truth,
A deceitful tirade
From a heartbreaking tooth.
I am called a despicable guy
Completely void of a soul
And a wondering eye.
A beautiful prequel
Deserving a round of applause,
Then a terrible sequel
Such a wonderful fraud.
I am called all this before I meet her,
But as far as the next one goes
I have yet to become a… cheater.
-JoeV-
by JoeV
posted on 07/06/2009
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Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Jul 7, 2009 12:23 pm
wow this is good. i like the descriptiveness..if that s a word. but still great job.Comment by jjxx1992: Jul 7, 2009 1:26 pm
great poem. flow was good and so was the wording. nice jobComment by itsme0405: Jul 7, 2009 4:05 pm
this is amazing!! I love this poem. you have outdone yourself, joe. I had to read it twice. great jobComment by grace25: Jul 7, 2009 6:55 pm
WOW this is really REALLY good! It amazing. your a great writer keep it up!Comment by WinstonRiley: Jul 12, 2009 9:58 am
Joe. Of yours I've read so far, this is my favorite but I feel it can benefit from more of your effort. I read these reviews where so many young people seem to be knocked over by the words of these authors here and I wonder, "do I lack their ear?"
Because most of what I read here wouldn't have passed muster with my 7th or 8th grade writing class...
But there is depth to your feeling. I just sense that you can still work the clay a little more to bring out that art in you which is deep down.
Good luck. For sure, don't stop.