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The Unsent Poem
Favorite song plays in the background
Every lyric reminding me of you
Conversations running through my head
So many things that I wish you knew
Everytime that you brought me happiness
I just never quite knew what to say
I was afraid to say the wrong thing
Thinking it would make you go away
Every night I did the same old thing
I wrote poem after poem on my bed
I love you written a hundred ways
Because of fear, they were never said
The stack of poems stands tall
Not one ever making it to you
You simply walked away from me
And a love that you never knew
If only I would have taken a chance
I know that you would still be here
At night I still write you many poems
Only now the ink is mixed with tears
by Brandon
posted on 12/03/2008
Every lyric reminding me of you
Conversations running through my head
So many things that I wish you knew
Everytime that you brought me happiness
I just never quite knew what to say
I was afraid to say the wrong thing
Thinking it would make you go away
Every night I did the same old thing
I wrote poem after poem on my bed
I love you written a hundred ways
Because of fear, they were never said
The stack of poems stands tall
Not one ever making it to you
You simply walked away from me
And a love that you never knew
If only I would have taken a chance
I know that you would still be here
At night I still write you many poems
Only now the ink is mixed with tears
by Brandon
posted on 12/03/2008
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Comments: 246
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Comment by eback2x: Feb 1, 2009 12:27 am
This is good !Comment by CrimsonHeart: Jun 16, 2009 11:16 pm
Man, I feel this exact same way. I write every single night on my bed for a girl who will never know how much I love her. Very, very, very good poem. Best I've read on this site.Comment by Greyhoundfb: Jun 15, 2009 1:03 am
GOOD JOBComment by trishaaa08: Sep 30, 2009 6:11 pm
awesome!Comment by kellistn: Mar 9, 2009 9:20 pm
what a romantic.
this is very good very impressed.
i can relate to it as well as i think a lot of other people can
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Dec 5, 2008 5:01 pm
.... this is a really good poem!! the unsent poem, thatz so good i swear , makes u think ay, all those poems you write n never give to the person you really want to read them, this pushes you to just do it, but when reality hits you n it comes down to it, i think were all just scared... i love it ..good on uComment by lostnlove: Jan 13, 2009 6:58 am
Wow, this says it so perfectly
great piece of poetry
Comment by chelseaatpeace: Jan 14, 2009 4:16 pm
oh i love the ending im so sorry you should have told them how much you loved them!but things will go the way they are supose to if the shouldComment by Babigurlbroken: Dec 9, 2008 8:18 am
holy shit.. i love it too.. damn, I really really like it... i vote up for this oneComment by scarlitt: Dec 3, 2008 10:35 pm
this is soo sweetComment by Katelann: Dec 11, 2008 3:11 pm
unreal, i loved it.Comment by fade: Dec 4, 2008 12:11 am
This is sad, but sweet. I like this because so many people lose that chance because of everything that's not said...so it's really cool to see that put to words.Comment by Selene: Dec 4, 2008 1:34 am
thank you. cuddles.Comment by brokenheartedarmysister: Dec 4, 2008 6:57 am
this poem is one of my favorites that you wroteComment by christalogy: Dec 4, 2008 10:52 am
that was beautiful.Comment by PeachFaygo: Dec 4, 2008 12:22 pm
brilliantComment by Tinkerbellpixie: Dec 4, 2008 1:40 pm
This is an incredible poem!! If I would have read this poem about a year ago, it would have inspired me to talk to the person I fell for. Fantastic poem.Comment by oceanreverie: Dec 4, 2008 4:30 pm
this is wonderful work, what a great poem! keep up the amazing work!Comment by angeliclove: Dec 4, 2008 5:17 pm
Incredible just like you..... All of your poems are wonderful and amazing
Comment by BurningAngel: Dec 4, 2008 6:01 pm
amazingComment by jordan24: Dec 4, 2008 6:20 pm
Wow, this is really inspiring.
I think I might give the person one of the many poems i wrote about and for him tomorrow.
Comment by Arlhen: Dec 5, 2008 5:54 am
GOD BLESSComment by Cornflakes: Dec 5, 2008 8:52 am
Wow...This Really Good...You Are An AMAZING Writer.Comment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 5, 2008 8:57 am
What a lovely poem. It's very sweet Comment by scarredemotions17: Dec 5, 2008 11:03 am
this is a well written poem and its very sad. sorry it had to be that wayComment by gabriella: Dec 5, 2008 8:14 pm
this is right on the button-- all of us are probably guilty of doing thisComment by soccerluv: Dec 5, 2008 8:46 pm
wow this is a great poem. exactly how i feel.Comment by kitten546: Dec 5, 2008 9:36 pm
wonderful very amazingComment by TheDarkShadow: Dec 5, 2008 10:19 pm
this is one of my favorite poems...wonderfully writtenComment by XxsidniestarxX: Dec 6, 2008 8:24 am
this makes me feel enriched...(if thats a word)
Its just too good to lay words upon it.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 6, 2008 10:17 am
wow the ending is awesome. coo poem BrandonComment by sparkin: Dec 6, 2008 11:20 am
The 3rd stanxa reminds me of myself!
It's a very warm and heartfelt poem. Good job!
Comment by arabianqu33n: Dec 6, 2008 1:24 pm
aww its so sad but so true...and even after reading it im sure nothing will change and again we'll allbe left with fear of the persons reaction and a bunch of unsent poems...Comment by fender32: Dec 6, 2008 2:11 pm
to trueComment by Sabra: Dec 6, 2008 9:15 pm
I really like the ending. It's good.Comment by Ashchildofdeath: Dec 7, 2008 10:50 am
that was so good. reminds me of everything i should've done when i had the chance. really amazing poem though. good job <3Comment by BurningAngel: Dec 7, 2008 5:59 pm
i love it great poemComment by HTFMike: Dec 8, 2008 12:58 am
AmazingComment by BuriedDeepAsICanDig: Dec 24, 2008 9:04 am
speechless!Comment by Elizajh: Dec 8, 2008 1:57 pm
literally as soon as I read the line 'and a love you never new' I started breaking down in tears. This poem is simply amazing. I don't believe that I could ever understand the reason why you didn't send one of your poems-they are all fantastic!Comment by SPAGACKULA: Dec 8, 2008 5:49 pm
Good!Comment by blackheart: Dec 8, 2008 6:57 pm
genius...we can all relate to this poem at one time or another in our lifeComment by jadead: Dec 8, 2008 7:21 pm
I really think this a great poem it is the story of many poetsComment by BlackRose: Dec 9, 2008 7:01 am
thats really good.. I love it and i do the same thing right poem after poem but becuz of far they will never kno.. i dont want to let them kno mad be they dont feel the same and i rather be a friend and have them not kno then not be a freind and have them knoComment by NOangelsLEFT: Dec 9, 2008 9:34 am
amazing ... I love itComment by cutiepie: Dec 9, 2008 9:37 am
awwww...
thats so sad,
but so good
good job
your still my number 1 idol on this site
Comment by BlackbookPast: Dec 9, 2008 5:40 pm
thats the truth all the way.Comment by deadinside212: Dec 9, 2008 5:44 pm
this is such a beautiful poemComment by Kylie: Dec 10, 2008 9:13 am
Well its not awful jk
You know I love everything you write
You should feel honored
This is my first comment
see you later
Comment by BellaItalianPrincess1018: Dec 10, 2008 9:48 am
This is a great poem..... I really admire your writing Comment by Slain: Dec 10, 2008 11:43 am
I love this poem,i used to do that too, thanks for writing it because it has true meaning GREAT!Comment by Yama321: Dec 21, 2008 11:12 pm
This is very good man...this is very good i know exactly what u mean..lol only if i wrote this Comment by crystal1234: Dec 10, 2008 1:34 pm
SO CUTE ADND KEEP IT UP........
Comment by PseudonymAnonymous: Dec 11, 2008 1:10 am
lovely. Comment by megsj: Dec 11, 2008 8:43 am
Good poem I am impressed keep it upComment by gothinlove: Dec 11, 2008 9:17 pm
Incredible poem
I can relate to this one
Keep writing -- they are really good
Comment by beautifulxhjfxdisaster: Dec 12, 2008 7:36 am
this is incredible!
=]
Comment by John1993: Dec 14, 2008 5:09 am
great poemComment by lonelygal: Dec 14, 2008 2:57 pm
sad, but i like itComment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Dec 15, 2008 7:37 am
I love that poem. I liked it so much that I typed it up on my flashdrive. I hope you don't mind. I didn't plagerise, though. Reading that poem, I decided to finally tell the person that I like that I like him. Thank you.Comment by BradfordAmatoJr: Dec 16, 2008 1:05 am
very goodComment by clinxi: Dec 16, 2008 4:36 am
i think im gunna go send those poems i have piled up Comment by wwwdotcom: Dec 16, 2008 3:41 pm
Wow, great poem. Really inspiring!Comment by LittleNikki: Dec 17, 2008 1:39 pm
This poem has really inspired me to do what I have been to scared to do. I'm actually giving more thought to make my Unsent Poems SENT POEMS. Your poem makes me want to go read more that you have wrote. I love it hun, keep up the great work.Comment by darkprincess: Dec 17, 2008 8:44 pm
This poem has inspired me too. Excellent poem for all poets that keep their work to themselves.Comment by mytragedy: Dec 17, 2008 9:53 pm
we all can relate to this poem
incredible
Comment by Villager: Dec 17, 2008 10:19 pm
Inspirational at its best
great poem
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Dec 27, 2008 1:45 pm
Very good poem. I can relate so much. Comment by BlackRose: Dec 19, 2008 6:35 am
i kno i sent you a comment
already but this peom is so
good i thikn i should give
you another one really good
Comment by BroodingChild: Dec 19, 2008 10:40 am
this is alright. i think the last line is good though "now the ink is mixed with tears."Comment by lonelyforlove: Dec 19, 2008 6:17 pm
man you are a genius...this poem basically explains what i feel for a girl i know...good job and thank you Comment by FadingAway: Dec 19, 2008 8:31 pm
beautifulComment by mrbrightsidexx: Dec 19, 2008 10:22 pm
I love the ink mixed with tears part at the end very creative...Comment by renegade1987: Dec 20, 2008 12:37 am
very well written.Comment by diamond: Dec 23, 2008 8:33 pm
this poem is mad nice it touched da heart servouse good job dang i wish i was a good righter lik u =]Comment by littlepieceofheaven: Dec 21, 2008 12:11 am
omg this poem was amazing.
you put all of these feelings we all go through at one point or another into words PERFECTLY
Comment by XimTheLost: Dec 23, 2008 2:00 pm
Tragic. And yet so true. Like I have said to many in person, but only one other here, honesty is what makes a poem, or any writing really, so great. Making the reader feel what you feel is the greatest achivement I can imagine. You touched my heart, so good job! (Wow, that last bit was sappy)Comment by TheDarkShadow: Dec 23, 2008 2:52 pm
amazzazingComment by hereliessam: Dec 24, 2008 6:36 pm
oh i can relate to this one, when u have so much to say to someone but cant bring yourself to say it. and if only ud sed something things wud be different. GET OUT OF MY HEADComment by underneathitall: Dec 28, 2008 9:33 am
loveeeee thisComment by eris17: Dec 28, 2008 3:33 pm
The ending is so sad, but i still love the poem.Comment by Zzeya: Dec 28, 2008 8:35 pm
this is an excellent piece of work. you do an excellent job of communicating the feelings of the poemComment by findmeinvisible: Dec 29, 2008 10:07 pm
wow the poems really good! i really like the last lineComment by hollygirl: Dec 30, 2008 4:10 pm
this poem is so great. I love itComment by Childproof: Jan 1, 2009 4:49 am
I love the sentiment! Its so introspective. The feelings that we have and never tell are often more intense than those that we reveal. You've captured that perfectly!Comment by Blackrain: Jan 2, 2009 3:32 am
this poem is amazing, it tells the story of many poets
excellent writing
Comment by jewelz777: Jan 4, 2009 8:37 pm
Love it! Comment by frenzy: Jan 5, 2009 4:46 pm
great poem
I love this poem
Comment by rayne482: Jan 6, 2009 9:56 am
Oh My God, I love it, it's so sad, and well written. Keep writing.Comment by Adele: Jan 7, 2009 10:02 am
Wow, that's really good. You captured that feeling really well!Comment by destinyisstrange: Jan 8, 2009 12:15 am
wow, i dont know just wow.Comment by vickielynn: Jan 11, 2009 2:37 pm
this is a very well written poem, it touched me because I can relate...Comment by Aspire2: Jan 11, 2009 2:53 pm
I like this one a lot. it really expresses something we have all most likely felt!Comment by bornastar: Jan 11, 2009 7:08 pm
i know thatfeelin and it's a pretty dark place to be in...Comment by DarkAbbey: Jan 12, 2009 8:50 pm
Perfectly written. I loved this poem.Comment by Ruth123: Jan 13, 2009 1:42 pm
that was soo romantic boiiComment by Ruth123: Jan 13, 2009 1:42 pm
that was soo romantic boiiComment by rmkc: Jan 14, 2009 10:13 am
perfectly unbelievably awesomeComment by ellie: Jan 14, 2009 11:12 am
I know exactly what you're feeling, it happened to me. It was really inspiring. It's not every day you find guys that write such thoughtful and deep poetry, I'm impressed. GREAT JOB! Keep writing.Comment by jenskie78: Jan 14, 2009 11:23 pm
keep making poems though it may unsent yet it would never be unread.. i love your work!Comment by heartbrokengirl1988: Jan 15, 2009 9:09 am
Kool Poem Brandon.Comment by Flower: Jan 15, 2009 10:26 pm
Terrific poem
almost every poet can relate to this poem
Comment by EmperorMosta: Jan 16, 2009 7:46 am
to say tell you the truth... this was the poem that inspired me to write poems.Comment by dead2you55: Jan 25, 2009 2:36 pm
i know how this is my boyfriend broke up with me in september but i still love him im always listening to songs that reminde me of him.. this is great please write moreComment by fallingagain: Jan 17, 2009 9:57 pm
Excellent poem
relates to all poets
Comment by inthecold: Jan 19, 2009 6:18 am
it is really inspiring
keep writing these masterpieces
Comment by blackheart: Jan 19, 2009 7:22 am
This is my favorite poem
I love it so much
Comment by passion14: Jan 21, 2009 4:08 pm
FREAKIN AWESOMEComment by Loveneet: Jan 22, 2009 6:36 pm
LovelyComment by ispymalloryy: Jan 22, 2009 10:08 pm
amazing , i know how you feelComment by lexismile5: Jan 23, 2009 1:53 am
i have a lot of those so i can relate with what your saying you are a genius of the heartComment by mylifeasacutter: Jan 25, 2009 7:37 pm
okay one you are amazing two you probably wont see this bc you already have 109 comments and three i love you!Comment by lionxxlamb: Jan 26, 2009 10:50 am
Your a good writer. I can feel your pain.Comment by heartlesslover: Jan 27, 2009 9:06 am
This is the coolest poem
I can definitely relate to these words
Comment by bac6n: Feb 1, 2009 4:55 am
fucking awesome!!Comment by angeloflove: Feb 1, 2009 5:45 pm
I love your poem soo mesmerizing and passionate!Comment by messengerbird: Feb 4, 2009 11:43 am
really good poem. i've been there, the difference is I was stupid enough to tell the person how I felt and give them the poems and they still turned their back on me. keep it up.Comment by KatieBunny: Feb 4, 2009 7:02 pm
okay, so I have acouple things to say about this lovely poem. First of all, I relate to it, ive been going through or doing the same thing. Secondly your wording was very descriptive and flowed rather nicely. good job. Comment by cooper: Feb 6, 2009 2:27 am
thats really nicely written
Comment by christi823: Feb 6, 2009 9:06 am
I nearly cried when I read this.
Remarkable; you captured my feeling perfectly.
Comment by kendaray: Feb 8, 2009 12:43 pm
that is the same thing that I doComment by Iamyou: Feb 9, 2009 7:47 pm
Exactly
great poem
Comment by Autumnblood: Sep 28, 2009 6:55 pm
U R AMAZING!!!!! LOOK HOW MANY COMMENTS U EVEN GOT!!!!!!
so, descriptive, it shud inspire many generations to come..... i admire your high quality work......not another wword to describe it..... :')
Comment by kailey: Feb 23, 2009 11:10 am
awe that was sad but goodComment by OMGitzSkittlez: Feb 12, 2009 8:09 pm
i love it. it was beautiful. i myself have a lot of unsent poems that i now regret. i always think "would it have been any different if i had showed him this? would he have still ended up with her?" but idk i cant change things. but this poem did help so much. i honestly adore it, so thanx a lot.Comment by mcmil: Feb 14, 2009 11:32 pm
great job mate!
easy to relate to
Comment by 07jmclean: Feb 15, 2009 2:52 pm
very sad keep writingComment by rdbenthernback: Feb 17, 2009 10:49 am
I know what it is like to go to that deep place. Nothing fills the hole of someone lost.Comment by Lifeless: Feb 18, 2009 4:36 pm
good poemComment by FallingDarknessXx: Feb 20, 2009 12:32 am
this is AMAZINGLY good.
i wish i could write like this
Comment by donewitlove: Feb 20, 2009 8:55 am
i like i like! Comment by XxPoisonRushxX: Feb 20, 2009 5:56 pm
This poem hits home with me, I don't know how many letters I have written to people that I never gave them and in the end I wish I had.Comment by deadiam: Feb 23, 2009 10:55 pm
Excelent poem...maybe I ll finally show her or tell her how I feel...its good to know that Im not alone...thanksComment by smartboi100: Mar 1, 2009 10:40 am
i like that dude...thats deepComment by deathmonkey: Mar 1, 2009 7:51 pm
This is really sweetComment by hollisun: Mar 2, 2009 5:52 pm
i love it. it makes you think and wow. it was really goodComment by silentheart: Mar 3, 2009 9:17 am
That is really good or I should say great.Comment by kailey: Mar 6, 2009 11:37 am
i really like this poemComment by Lenore: Jul 21, 2009 8:59 pm
Good work :o)Comment by gelinoguibone: Mar 8, 2009 9:03 am
It is really good
Comment by SweetDeathIsWhoIAm: Mar 8, 2009 5:17 pm
wow a lot of comments
This is really good
I love it
Comment by mcburger99: Mar 11, 2009 7:36 pm
very goodComment by bubbles13: Mar 13, 2009 5:56 pm
It is very true.Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Mar 14, 2009 4:03 pm
I really love the ending...u r a great poet!Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Mar 15, 2009 2:00 pm
This is a really really good poem,it is so relateable too,I love that,I love this.Comment by zato: Mar 16, 2009 7:55 am
wicked poem!Comment by toxicchubakka: Mar 17, 2009 9:40 pm
vague boring its simply garbage sorry to say thatComment by cauterisedscar: Mar 18, 2009 9:26 am
That poem flowed so well, you made all your feelings transfer to the writing
x
Comment by scared2bealone: Mar 19, 2009 3:08 am
i already experienced this
and bcoz of this poem i still cry thnking about it it's so beautiful and it's sad in a way bcoz we could all feel the pain and sadness of the person in your poem... please make some more Comment by cyndel: Mar 19, 2009 5:31 pm
i love this poem. its really good. Comment by scram2runaway: Apr 11, 2009 8:14 pm
its soo true!!!
Comment by Luv4shelly: Mar 20, 2009 1:15 pm
this is an amazing poem!!!Comment by knot2b4goten: Mar 22, 2009 12:46 pm
amazing, very romantic!! 2 thumbs upComment by dstalk: Mar 23, 2009 12:59 pm
wowComment by Babigurlbroken: Mar 23, 2009 5:50 pm
Vote up, this is exellent.Comment by squirrel352: Mar 26, 2009 1:49 pm
yo im in tha same placeComment by SilentBeauty: Mar 25, 2009 5:46 pm
i really like this poem it kind of reminds me of myself at some points its beautifulComment by SilentBeauty: Mar 25, 2009 5:46 pm
i really like this poem it kind of reminds me of myself at some points its beautifulComment by fanpirewerevocate: Mar 25, 2009 5:56 pm
Seriously, how many comments are there? WowComment by ColdHeartedPoet: Mar 29, 2009 7:19 pm
Thank you for writing that poem. I love it. It connects with me well. Comment by UnlikelyHero: Mar 31, 2009 10:11 pm
Wow i can, as i'm sure most of us can relate very well to this. Good job.Comment by christinaxxnguyen: Apr 11, 2009 1:31 pm
Thank you, your poem inspired me to do something (:Comment by kristomisto: Apr 5, 2009 1:30 am
i like it! and your description..thats how i feel about all of my poems just aabout!Comment by NeverTheEnd92: Apr 8, 2009 1:04 am
I enjoyed this very much.Comment by manusorrowz: Apr 20, 2009 7:17 pm
Man when i read this i cried, man i know what your going through. Awsome JOb!Comment by Benhumbled: Sep 4, 2009 11:11 am
Nicely done.Comment by justmeonlyme: Apr 16, 2009 9:59 am
Sad but, good.Comment by Heartbroken120: Apr 21, 2009 3:33 am
this is sad. but so true. great job.Comment by nana2195: Apr 21, 2009 6:03 pm
some people are afraid to express their feelings but some people like brandon really know how to WOW people. i love it. keep doing a great job!!! Comment by neverinlove: Apr 22, 2009 1:37 pm
winderfulComment by missdramaqueen011: Apr 24, 2009 5:56 pm
took my breath away. I love it so so so much. Great job.Comment by xxdistortedxxxx: Apr 27, 2009 2:06 am
awComment by angeliclove: Apr 27, 2009 6:37 pm
Excellent writing on a subject
most poets can relate to at one
time or another.
Comment by lexi: Apr 27, 2009 6:46 pm
Wow, excellent poemComment by KCFangel: Apr 27, 2009 10:22 pm
awwwwwwwwwwwComment by brokenxvampirexheart: May 1, 2009 11:36 am
I know how you feel, I do that every night. Sometimes I dont even get sleep because im writing so much, i never gave those poems to the person i should have and now hes gone, and im dead.Comment by Duchess21: May 2, 2009 5:10 pm
This is so sad, and beautiful. I absoloutley love it. It's wonderful. I love how your poem can relate to the readers.Comment by sadseas: May 2, 2009 6:44 pm
I've written pomes for people to and never sent them. I liked your pome!Comment by FallenAngel369: May 2, 2009 8:12 pm
this is beautiful i love it! its sadComment by lawbound22: May 3, 2009 11:29 pm
but no seriously. you got good poems. Comment by notsogood: May 4, 2009 12:32 pm
Its very nice..I really liked it! Comment by darkblacksoul: May 6, 2009 9:25 pm
amazingComment by rhczar: May 7, 2009 6:05 am
wow man. the ink is mixed with tears great lineComment by unknowngirl: May 7, 2009 6:49 am
w0w! it's really good
keep writting...
Comment by MrsPerez: May 7, 2009 1:37 pm
This is a great poem! I hope you continue to write poemsComment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: May 9, 2009 7:14 am
I love that poem. I can so relate to it
Comment by ambeebambee: May 9, 2009 7:35 am
REALLLLY REALLY Goood. Your fantastic, great splendid. wowComment by anuj: May 13, 2009 12:37 am
whoa.........stronggggggggg........... i gues dats y dey say i shdnt wait......... Comment by TheTrueEnigma: May 15, 2009 8:13 pm
Wow, just wow.Comment by Cloudedmind: May 21, 2009 11:41 pm
sweet =] (Y)Comment by BrokenXBlossom: May 24, 2009 9:09 pm
love itComment by Kiam: May 28, 2009 10:33 pm
Beautiful hunComment by Uypanel: Jun 1, 2009 12:15 am
Nicely done.Comment by Nelliii: Jun 6, 2009 5:35 am
One of the best poems I've read on this site. So beautiful...Comment by Angelsvoice: Jun 6, 2009 4:28 pm
Truly beautiful.Comment by christinababe903: Jun 7, 2009 11:21 am
<3 im speechlessComment by joshwan123: Jun 8, 2009 3:46 pm
WOW awesome. I think almost everyone can relate.Comment by Krovi: Jun 8, 2009 11:03 pm
Wow... I feel like I wrote this one myself.
... My name is Brandon too. o_o
Comment by regretful99: Jun 10, 2009 2:49 am
I genuinely love this poem, as it contains sentiments I FULLY understand and am haunted by. beautiful work.Comment by melissagrosberg: Jun 10, 2009 3:45 pm
i can totally relate, brandon. this is wonderful. she's probably a very lucky girl. well done.Comment by DamagedHeart: Jun 13, 2009 12:25 pm
This is Amazing! Wow!Comment by Itami: Jun 17, 2009 9:39 pm
Sad abd wonderful at the same time. Makes me think if it's really worth it to hide all my feelings from a special person.Comment by girlX: Jun 19, 2009 6:24 pm
I like this poem a lot because when i liked this guy late at night I would do the same thing..only this time the tears came because of telling him. But when I read this poem I just think of how bad it could of been if I never told him. Comment by JonxSmith: Jul 1, 2009 2:22 pm
wow...Comment by David93: Jul 1, 2009 8:20 pm
nice...very nice...i like this one alotComment by ThisGirl: Jul 12, 2009 12:38 am
Wow, I love it...I can totally relate!Comment by LydiaLorieau: Jul 14, 2009 2:46 am
im writing poems about a boy named brandon....very niceComment by rmfxa: Jul 14, 2009 9:41 pm
powerful stuff manComment by Julieelovesyou: Jul 16, 2009 7:54 pm
wow this is really goodComment by Allune: Jul 17, 2009 7:05 am
Wow. I nearly cried... Stunning.Comment by kc822: Jul 30, 2009 9:00 pm
I really liked it! I've felt the same way before, and it sucks, believe you me. It was a little cliche at the bottom, but I felt alot of real emotion from it. Comment by NixNi: Jul 24, 2009 11:11 pm
its so heartfelt... i think im gonna cryComment by allieykat: Jul 29, 2009 2:52 pm
o...m...g...Comment by prettyspl: Jul 29, 2009 5:05 pm
I agree pretty much with all of the above! : ) GREAT ...Comment by jmdkblopez5: Aug 2, 2009 6:02 pm
It is so hard sometimes to be able to give that certain someone what you wrote. I agree with you completely.Comment by Imyoursifyouwantme: Aug 10, 2009 4:21 pm
absolteuly phenomenal, all i want to say and all the reasons why i cannot. if only...Comment by Julieelovesyou: Aug 10, 2009 11:56 pm
i really like this it really reminds me of myselfComment by howdyyy: Aug 11, 2009 2:46 pm
this is so good.Comment by azeezoluwa: Aug 11, 2009 4:45 pm
thoughtfulComment by babyboogt82886: Aug 18, 2009 5:18 am
Very well written! Comment by dannaenae94: Aug 18, 2009 6:12 am
WOW. thats amazing! i totally know how that feels!! very nice!!! 5/5Comment by Mhayes: Aug 20, 2009 7:49 pm
Aw
I know how that feels all to well. I have quite the stack also.Comment by Alexanne: Aug 29, 2009 7:34 pm
awesome!Comment by deejay: Sep 12, 2009 3:21 am
All of these comments are tuly deserved. A beautifully written poem. I am feeling kind of emotional at the moment and it even made me tear up! (Pathetic of me i know!)Comment by Babigurlbroken: Sep 19, 2009 6:29 pm
ok, surely this is the one poem on here that still manages to capture everyone's attention, and you must have the most comments. I haven't read it for a while, so I decided to read it again. It's so amazing and perfect and beautiful.... Comment by Eliu: Oct 2, 2009 6:38 pm
That was deep, keep on writing!Comment by jimbo85: Oct 2, 2009 7:31 pm
love it!Comment by missdramaqueen011: Oct 11, 2009 8:40 pm
Comment by missdramaqueen011: Apr 24, 2009 5:56 pm
took my breath away. I love it so so so much. Great job.
And commenting again! This is a good poem. Really. Don't ever stop writing, please.
Comment by dyingroselost15: Oct 14, 2009 11:41 am
Amazing job. I really love this peom. Something many people can relate to. Wonderful. Truly lovelyComment by Xeroz: Oct 20, 2009 6:07 pm
waht happened to said person?Comment by GreshamGirl09: Oct 21, 2009 9:28 am
omg i really like this one i practically do the same thing except for a guy... but yea it's really inspiring...Comment by sincerlyme: Oct 21, 2009 1:14 pm
This is really good
Comment by jaybayybayy808: Oct 21, 2009 8:30 pm
I absolutely love this :]
It's like what i've always felt and done execpt I can actually see it written in front of me,
I could never put it in words.
Thanks :]
Comment by ellipsis: Oct 21, 2009 9:33 pm
if you ever really love something, you wont ever stop.Comment by Adeq: Oct 26, 2009 9:31 pm
Omg!
This is really Lovely,
I like how the writer creats the "real" image at the start.
So many of my poems were never sent and this has some personal attachments for me.
Comment by stratosgreek: Oct 31, 2009 5:48 am
very nice poem! sad poem!Comment by jazon132: Nov 2, 2009 5:25 am
amazin.. good job.. Comment by FaithfulFriend: Nov 8, 2009 12:25 am
this is so true. i can relate so well. amazing poem!Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:26 am
too true