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The Scar

I wanted to be near you
So I called you every day
Not sure what to do
Not sure what to say
As usual you answer
I ask you how you've been
And then just like a cancer
You hurt me once again
Loneliness becomes my friend
Just as it is my foe
And if my heart will ever mend
The scar you left will always show

by Alomentis
posted on 04/26/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 12:39 am

great job - i like it Smiley

Comment by duhdude18: May 4, 2008 5:10 pm

amazing.

Comment by Sari: May 4, 2008 11:24 am

i like it

Comment by BrittanyLafoe: Apr 30, 2008 12:15 pm

Love it.

Comment by kayla: Apr 26, 2008 3:31 am

Very good poem, flows really nicely.

Comment by cooper: Apr 26, 2008 6:35 am

but you know what scars just show us that we have lived, and that we have fought, and you should be proud of that. you put yourself out there for love, not everyone will do that these days.

hun, you will be okay

Comment by kareohline012: Apr 26, 2008 7:32 am

very good, poem. i like it a lot, full of emotion, great job

Comment by babyboogt82886: Apr 26, 2008 7:57 am

WOW...I REALLY LIKE THIS! VERY GOOD!

Comment by lyyra: Apr 26, 2008 8:14 am

well done

Comment by Korn: Apr 26, 2008 8:51 am

The more I read other peoples work I take comfort in knowing someone else can relate. That was truly deep, good job!

Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 27, 2008 5:36 pm

wooow. wicked awesome. and cooper is right. a scar is like a medal dude

Comment by Holychild: Apr 27, 2008 6:44 pm

Sounds like me. I vote up. nice work
Alomentis keep them coming.. i'm looking forward to reading more of your poems my disciple:] Jesus is at your side.
Love&Peace.

Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 27, 2008 7:24 pm

omg I felt as if you were speaking for me...
the best poems are the ones that people can relate to, nothing too complicated just straight out and to the point
and this poem is like that
really good work

Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 28, 2008 8:28 am

this is soo sad
I felt every word as well
As if I were the one going through this
Great poem and keep writing

Comment by kaylasheray: Apr 28, 2008 7:36 pm

i really like this... it made me think of the guy that does the exact same thing to me

Comment by christi823: Apr 29, 2008 12:08 pm

Wow, this captured my attention easily and held it, considering there's screaming kids around me.
It flows very well, just like everyone said.
I really enjoyed it.
Keep it up.
[[:

Comment by linandbet: Apr 30, 2008 9:17 am

this is really good, short, and good. it's not draught out and it's honest and innocent. i like this a lot

Comment by FalseHood: Apr 30, 2008 1:03 pm

In all of the world
Who would not say
That yours is of the best
In everyway?

Comment by siLeNce16: May 1, 2008 5:00 am

it's very nice. keep writing. ^^

Comment by emsue11392: May 2, 2008 10:19 am

LOVE IT!!!!!
comment mine please!!!!

Comment by coldfire146: May 2, 2008 12:16 pm

i love it

Comment by Lover26: May 9, 2008 1:47 pm

I love it lots...

Comment by AmyRocksIt: May 9, 2008 1:52 pm

I actually really like this poem.
Just saying that no matter what you do, your hurt will always be with me.
I like how you portrayed it.

Comment by dyinginside52: May 9, 2008 9:36 pm

i really like this poem

Comment by danfinner: May 13, 2008 5:54 am

I like it, it's exactly what I'm feeling. It hurts. Sad face

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