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the real meaning of a broken heart

Sadness flies away on the wings of time
I don't know why they call it heartbreak.
It feels like every other part of my body is broken too
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak;
sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

What is the opposite of two?
A lonely me,
a lonely you.
God can heal a broken heart,
but He has to have all the pieces.
Sometimes I wish I were a little kid again,
skinned knees are easier to fix than broken hearts

Where you used to be,
there is a hole in the world,
which I find myself constantly walking around in the daytime,
and falling in at night.
You feel so close inside
But I can hardly breathe
You have taken over me

by girlX
posted on 07/04/2009

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Comment by Essence: Jul 4, 2009 12:44 pm
How can you saw it is bad?!?! it is one of the best i ever read!!! keep writing i love it!! its better than my stuff...
Comment by JoeV: Jul 4, 2009 12:19 pm
There is nothing bad about this! Exactly the opposite, this is an amazing write. I loved it.

"Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak;
sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go." - what an amazing line. Very nice write, please keep them coming.
Comment by kiraralee77: Jul 5, 2009 3:25 pm
i agree with JoeV. amazing line. and amazing poem. i completely understand what you mean with this poem.
and the part in the beginning with why its called a heartbreak when everywhere else is broken too... i totally feel ya there. my whole body and soul was broken when i had a heartbreak... was not just my heart.
keeps it up!!. great poem
Comment by dreamer13: Jul 12, 2009 3:16 pm
This amazing (:
very good choice of words!
Comment by girlX: Aug 29, 2009 7:40 pm
Thanks you people but I have kind of lost my insperation if anyone could give me some tips that would be great! Thanks again!
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