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The Quest

Should I move or should I stay?
If you get things wrong, my world will become pale and gray.

But gray is not the word. Maybe cold or dead, while I'm thinking about the right word my life gets a little sad.

I stay empty, I have my palace, my jewels and my throne. But I'm still worthless if alone.

I've found the most precious thing in the world. I can't touch but I can feel. All these years I've fought with words and steel.

You're the reason for this quest. And now I've found you. The Angel from my dreams. It was harder then it seems but it's finally over. I need no more this four-leaf clover.

While waiting for your blessing you taught me wonderful things. To see the things the way you see. I ran to the lake to watch my reflection, just to realize, that you don't feel the same for me.

Thx for the comments :3

by Brighenti
posted on 12/08/2007

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Comment by MysticFog: Dec 8, 2007 11:20 am
Whoa...that's so beautiful. Very deep. Amazing Poem.
Comment by ThatGirlFi: Dec 8, 2007 1:19 pm
i think this amazing.
Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 8, 2007 3:35 pm
Great poem Smiley
It's so beuatiful
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Comment by shirotora: Dec 8, 2007 9:54 pm
thispoem os realy beautiful. great job.
Comment by mysterianne': Dec 8, 2007 11:58 pm
i think the lake was trying to reflect a great truth for you...the lake is wise enough to know all we search for lies deep within our very own eyes...


mysterianne'
Comment by Brighenti: Dec 9, 2007 5:03 am
Yes, it's smething like that, but you can see it other way.

since she taught him to see the things the way she sees, he wanted to see himself that way. So he ran to the lake to see his own reflection, himself. By looking at himself the way she looks at him he could realize that she didn't love him.
Comment by starrynight001: Dec 10, 2007 10:02 am
Wow another great poem!!!
Comment by romantichomicide: Jan 13, 2008 5:21 am
i swear you stalk me sounds good
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