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The Moon's Eclipse

I never realized
How much he means to me
I guess it's when you get hit
With him leaving, you realize

He may not be here tomorrow.

And, I never really realized
How much he influences me,
Like the moon in my sky
A constant in a changing life

I soon learned,
He may not be in my sky forever.

No, no, I realize now
He had been outshined by the Sun in my sky
And now, at this moment where he is in focus.
My sky, has been darkend to the harsh reality of his loss,
by his eclipse.

Because now it is his turn to be known, without my sky.

by Kitten
posted on 05/16/2007

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Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 16, 2007 4:56 am
Nice one. Different. I like.
Comment by Wezmonkey: May 16, 2007 9:33 am
... i think i see where your coming from... youll have to explain it to me later...But its a good poem...I really REALLY like it...
Comment by Styrmwolf: May 16, 2007 5:07 pm
I really like this one K, it's really powerful.
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 9, 2007 4:28 pm
nice anololgy.
btw, hi. =) (jesssi)
Comment by solonely: Aug 29, 2008 6:49 am
good
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