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the love and pain she can't compare

A cold shiver up her spine
the death she witnessed through her eyes
her fear chokes her
as she tries to breath
her legs are weak and
begin to collapse
confusion sratches at her head
way to young to comphrend
the one she loves pushes her to the ground
and yet is the one who catches her everytime..

by unoiluvpurple69
posted on 03/01/2007

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Comment by DarkDevotions: Mar 1, 2007 7:41 pm
Wow...this i really good. I like the imagery and the flow of the words. It's amazing! You are really good!!
Comment by angelkempt: Mar 2, 2007 7:19 am
i lyk it
Comment by rmcbryde: Mar 2, 2007 11:05 am
Awesome. I feel like this sometimes
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 3, 2007 5:57 pm
im breathless by this. truly amazing hun. great job. like my heart is being constricted by your words
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