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The Last Wall

All falls down around me
Pain releases itself to drown me
The last thing I will see will be your eyes
Knowing they never held truth, only lies
You say that you love me but I can't believe you
Don't get me wrong, I used to
After all that you have done, I lost hope
I'm hanging on a string, not a rope
You hold the scissors to let me fall
But I refuse to let you past the last wall
I let the rest down but this one I can't
Because from my heart you are forever banned

by scarsofsecrets
posted on 06/20/2008

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Comment by sadeyesgirl: Jun 23, 2008 12:34 pm
good job
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jun 23, 2008 8:45 am
Oooo. I like.
Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 22, 2008 3:27 pm
nice
Comment by Lover26: Jun 22, 2008 12:47 pm
I love it very much!! Excellent job!!! =]]
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jun 22, 2008 9:48 am
I agree with burgerking888, very beautiful.
Comment by RescueMe: Jun 20, 2008 11:40 pm
this is a wonderful poem it holds a lot of emotion and that makes it wonderful
Comment by burgerking888: Jun 20, 2008 11:16 pm
That was beautiful,but sad at the same time
Comment by BrokenLove: Jun 20, 2008 9:48 pm
Good.
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