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the fire inside

the fire insideburns away
burns away the bones and skin
i open my mouth to breath out
and ashes float
intoxicated eyes
flames erupt where i stand
i choke on smoke
i am but ash- floating on warm summer air
my soul gone, and my heart not but coal

by meltedsnowman
posted on 11/03/2009

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Comment by xDestructive: Nov 3, 2009 9:23 pm
interesting, different, somehow... intriguing definition of the burning inside. . wicked write, sad definitely. the ending especially.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 5, 2009 5:30 am
whoa...This is incredible...Deep and intense with a lot of emotion...
and utmost despair...sadly enough Sad face
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